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  1. Thanks for the chapter! YEAHH, MR. KNIGHT! They’re so cool, I love them so. I kind of imagined them throwing the other three out of the driving seat like picking up cats by the scruff of their necks and telling the three to play nicely lmao.

    The way Marc clearly envies how close/comfortable Steven and Jake are with each other is so heart-wrenching. The two only had each other without Marc for such a long time and it really shows in those subtle cues that Marc picks up. And that sudden realization that he loves them! GUH. My heart. <3

    Also, those two paragraphs about the egg! I’m chewing on the little bit of explanation like scrambled eggs. It seems like the kid alter was inserted into their brain? But the kid also mentioned someone wanted to dispose of them. Dispose of them in Moon Knight’s brain? o_O Trying to make the gears in my brain work but nothing’s coming out. I’m thinking I don’t have the full picture yet.

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    1. YES!! You understand my vision surrounding Mr. Knight grabbing them by their scruffs. I love it.

      Also, yes, you don’t have the full picture yet, but it’ll come into fruition one day, I promiiisseee :)

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