Pounce D. Leon sounds like a super cool character so far, his description is lively and his intriguing nickname gives a hint that he's powerful. I love the idea of a pirate rivalry! It really reminds me of the two battling giants in OP, I have a huge soft spot for character dynamics like that! I enjoyed their interaction, them opposing each other in the midst of an all-out battle is very intense (and anime) of them! Perfect. I really enjoy all the crew members, I like that they all get a little description, they're very creative and I'm looking forward to learning more about them and their powers! Gwyar Zelgius' description is *chef's kiss*, by the way, wow, great job on the prose! I love how you described the tensions in the group; even though they're all united under Pounce D. Leon, they don't all get along, which is very different from the Straw Hats, but you see that all the time in OP, which makes this pirate crew feel like it works very well within the world of OP. Pounce D. Leon is a very nice name, by the way, it feels uniquely One Piece if that makes sense! I also like how intentionally vague he is lol, almost smug, clearly he knows something and I'm curious what it is! "Lynx's eyes" is a super cool nickname oh my gosh! You do a very good job of building the tension with the crew slowly getting more nervous. I'm also really enjoying the prose, you have a very descriptive style! Wow, Pounce D. Leon really showed why he is their captain with his final stand, not only loyal but protective of his crew, and incredibly brave. I see why everyone wants to follow him! I really like his line about wishing to die in battle rather than living as a coward, his stubbornness and strength is something else! I'm super intrigued by his prophecy, for lack of a better word! He's looking towards the future, far beyond himself, and I loooove it when characters do that, especially as they're about to die. I'm very curious about this mysterious successor, just like the reset of the crew! Wooow the final lines leading up to the captain unleashing all his power were very intense, I'm already sad that he's out the story! He seems like a super cool character I would love to read more about, and at the same time reading about the void he's going to leave will also be very intriguing. Anyway, amazing job, I'm so hooked!
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SaskiaSketches on Chapter 2 Sat 20 Sep 2025 02:21PM UTC
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