Goonettethethird



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  1. Rec 5

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    "Alan had often speculated on the wicked things that Dorian did in the shadow of night, and with whom. These were hardly the thoughts of a proper gentleman, but perhaps he enjoyed spending time with Dorian because he was a bit of a menace himself."

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    Set at the height of their friendship, this story follows the very first time that Alan Campbell let himself be corrupted.

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    13 Sep 2025

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    Very good writing, I love the adding of poem and the image of the daphodil ( how to write that word ). I also love the idea that Dorian and Alan used to intimate and the way it was explore was super interesting. And also the usage of words and image is marvelous, I have an impression with their conversation while smoking and the mention of daffodil at the end.

  2. Rec 26

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    A late-night visitor causes Basil to voice secrets and fantasies he was trying to keep in the dark. Unluckily for him, Dorian takes full advantage of that.

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    13 Sep 2025

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    Good writing and good character analysis, especially the way you portrayed Basil. Your writing makes me emotional, I was kinda upset with the death of Basil in the og novel so reading this really make me burst out crying lol, and the ending left me with an emptiness ( I absolutely love ending like this bcuz it gave me sense of uncertain about what is going to happen next ). Beside, the conversation between these two and basil's reaction slowly shifted from anger, dissapoinment to hopelessly is AMAZING. YOU REALLY DID THIS SO FUCKING GOOD!!!! DORIAN WOULDN'T GIVE AF ABOUT BASIL AND YOU CONVEY THIS SO WELL AJVXKSBWIXJXB 10/10 would read again when depressed !!!