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There may be some criticism for the way I have used the character's voice, use of pronouns. But it was quite deliberate. This is purely a thought based story. It unfolds purely in the mind/thoughts of one character. I wanted this to convey for the reader as if they were thinking, experiencing the thoughts of the character. So the lack of use of names is deliberate. The character has no need to use names. That sounds cryptic and odd, but it was deliberate, and I hope allows the reader to feel it more. But, I could be completely wrong. I'm not even sure I've finished this yet. And it is a completely fantasized/imagined event.
As ever, please feel free to comment. If this isn't working for the reader, I need to know. Writing is such a solitary industry, and yet one goal is to discover if the reader enters into the story and experiences it. So, I do appreciate, and hope to grow with any comments or feedback.
Fair warning, explicit. So for any who do not enjoy erotic descriptions, you can avoid this.