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Between two worlds

Summary:

Anana the Bright, a Thoan Lord of Creation, sits alone in a dive, awaiting an unknown future.

This story is set on an Earth variant within the Thoan Monad (mislabeled as a “cluster”), to the northeast of Earth One in the Icewall universe, but events of each mirror the other to a surprising extent.

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𝑫𝒐𝒏'𝒕 𝒇𝒐𝒓𝒈𝒆𝒕 𝒕𝒐 𝑳𝒊𝒌𝒆, 𝑺𝒉𝒂𝒓𝒆, 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝑺𝒖𝒃𝒔𝒄𝒓𝒊𝒃𝒆! ❤️

Notes:

For the curious, the song referred to is Jerry was a race car driver (Primus, 1991).


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Work Text:

Jerry was a race car driver, why was this song stuck in her head?

She returned to her milkshake, then stared out the window, the milkshake forgotten again.

It's not a particularly good song.

A few stray leaves whisked by, the breeze catching them on their travels and lodging one firmly in the hat of a passerby who walked on unawares.

I don't even understand what the damned thing's about.

The café wasn't quite entirely empty, but might as well have been for all of the business that they seemed liable to get — the day had begun so bright, then turned blustery, and now couldn't make up its mind, not quite cold or wet enough to drive people to shelter and a warm belly, nor yet quite so hot and humid as to force them to seek relief and something cool to quench their parched throats.

 

I might as well simply leave, really; it's not as if I'm accomplishing anything here, and none of the books hold any real attraction for me.

She'd been stuck on Earth One for several years now, staying close to the Hohokam Homes development the whole time, always hoping to hear the peal of Shambariman's horn signaling her way back to Kickaha's world.

Still, the waitress is cute, and doesn't seem to mind my being here — ugh, that damned riff is there again!

As she sat there, the day took a decided turn northwesterly, the overcast thickening and increasingly turbulent as it mixed with the ground winds from Baja.

If I'm careful, I should be able to make this 'shake last a little while longer before she gets too impatient — or suspicious...

Even as she thought this, she could sense the waitress approaching, but before she could glance over, a small saucer with a slice of pie found its way in front of her.

What...

She looked up, only to see the waitress retreating to her station.

 

I didn't order this — I certainly can't pay for this — why did she bring me this?

She began to stand up, to return the offering to her benefactress, but thought better of it.

She brought it to me unsought, so why shouldn't I eat it?

Her belly growled as she reached for her fork tentatively, eyeing the dollops of ice cream riding atop the pie.

Slowly, don't wolf it down, just take small bites and wait between them...

As she swallowed the first morsel, the waitress glanced at the clock, walked over to the door, turned the latch, and flipped the sign.

Well, so much for that plan.

The waitress simply waved her down to finish her dish.

That buys me some time, at any rate.

 

Time passed, and the pie grew smaller, as did the remainder of her drink.

I suppose that that's that, then...

As she set down her fork on the empty plate and looked longingly at her equally empty glass, the waitress slid into the seat across the table from her.

Now what?

Her erstwhile benefactress set down a milkshake, along with two straws, then looked inquiringly to Anana, who couldn't help smiling back.

 

 

O ~~~ O

 

Notes:

Yes, as of ~Feb 2021 I've been playing with further chapters wherein they do get together (that's a given), probably launching from this one as a prologue (that seems more fitting than treating this as a short story unto itself, but we'll see).  Ann, the waitress whom we met here in chapter one, is one Annie Folliot (or [strictly] a version of the same), the granddaughter of Clive, from Philip José Farmer's “Dungeon” series.  Whether Ann gets to see Alofmethbin specifically (or any of the other canon worlds in either series), I don't know yet; the outline is still only a few highlights and <1K words of narration.

I'll give you a sneak preview though: so far, they're set to go camping an hour and a half northeast of Tempe (AZ, USA), get chased by Gworl, and fall into a [non-canon] poorly lit web-world (somehow, Doris Piserchia's description in “Earth in twilight” really grabbed me, and I suspect fed into this realm's conception ~34 years later).

UPDATE, 11 Nov 2022:  Back in September, I ironed out my projected writing schedule for 2023.  There are 12 items on the list and 5 others (including this one) not officially on it but vying for attention anyway.  This one is nagging at me to see the next material out (whether as further chapters to this one, or as a new fic with this as a standalone).  I gotta caution that this one was the last one to make the cut, so it'll still be a while before I hit it (time and ADHD permitting) — so until then, please enjoy my other fics (in thematically arranged collections for ease of browsing) — but I figured that some readers might wish to know. 🙂
NB, 30 May 2024:  Writing year 2023 began with having finished a tutorial on how to work out one's [own] fics' reader traffic flow rates (daily peaks and troughs per half hour of the day, etc.), but that segued into a year-long 48/7 study of AO3's overall traffic rates and patterns ({bookmarks, works, comments, hits [and my own works' hits for comparison and contrast], and kudos} and how they were obtained), which pushed my entire 2023 writing schedule to 2024(+?); my apologies for that — but this fic's sequel is still on my [literal] list of projected WIPs (#19/26, in the current sequence), and I felt that I shouldn't leave this unmentioned. ❤️

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