What happened to the stars?

We were set a piece of descriptive work for English so I wrote this. It's a description of what happened when Etheria was pulled into Despondos (or what my brain could come up with). I suppose this could be Madame Razz POV. I have no intention of continuing this unless people like it so tell me your thoughts.
There is some mention of burning that it kind of graphic but I don't think it was that bad it needed to be a warning. Let me know though.

Notes:

I kind of like this but it's a bit dramatic and unfinished.

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:

There were no stars anymore. Replacing them were fragments of light so bright and orange that they hurt. They burned. Unlike the stars, this light wasn't kind. It was mean and hungry and powerful light intent on gobbling up everything in its path. And it did.

At first, only a few trees were infected. But as more and more were slaughtered, the army grew. Then they started attacking the people. Skin melted, hair burnt and eyes watered. It didn't smell good. Some fore smelt nice, like barbecues and bonfires. This was toxic gas in a room with no windows. This was choking.

Voices overlapped hazily.

Notes:

This is a lot shorter than I thought. It takes up half an A4 page in my book.
Thank you for reading! If there's anything wrong or you have any tips, please let me know. Do people want to see my plan because you can see where I gave up?
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