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Only a matter of time. Barry knew that, had known it since he'd seen Rafe's dead-eyed mugshot on the local news above the headline "CAMERON SON GOES FREE." They'd released a rabid, raving animal back into the world like it was nothing. Like he wouldn't go straight to Barry's place with the intent to kill.
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woahhhhhh
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barry x rafe
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WOW. THERE’S SO MUCH HERE. You captured their voices so fucking well, the mannerisms, the motives, I’m in love, I’m in awe.
I saved a couple quotes.
“Him and Rafe, eating each other alive. To the bone.”
I’m completely fucked and done for this bc it’s like WOW?? I was considering what does it take to write true desire and I’ve noticed that all my favorite authors use that bottom part of Maslow’s triangle and take it away from the characters. Rafe and Barry are starving so they eat each other alive. TO DESIRE SOMEONE IS TO WANT TO CONSUME THEM. You did this so PERFECTLY.
“He didn't say family like he usually did. Like it was a religion to be worshipped.”
Yup yup this is very accurate & shows how Barry’s put words to what he sees of Rafe’s feelings about things. V cute.
“Barry's bottom lip bled gladly between Rafe's teeth.”
Writing like this makes me want to cry and laugh and join a commune yk? Gladly? Perfection. Perfection!!