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Part 3 of Character Commentaries
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2011-11-27
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2012-05-25
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In the Eye

Chapter 5: Hurricane Winds

Summary:

Sometimes all you can do is keep your head down and hope to ride it out.

Notes:

(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

Chapter Text

The veteran hunter watched,
powerless on the maelstrom's edge,
as the damned angels fought.
Castiel, victor,
two bullets short of a clip,
refused Dean's pleas to return the stolen souls.

Dean should've saved his breath.
That much power corrupts even angels.

Sam, resurrected,
knifed Cas in the back,
killing all hope of diplomacy.

Cas thought to take Daddy's place
as all-powerful god, judge and savior.
He commanded their obedience.
"Profess your love unto me, your Lord. Or I shall destroy you."

Crap, another tin god.
Cas, ya idjit!

The storm's flood waters rising quickly,
Bobby just hoped they wouldn't drown.

Notes:

A/N Hope you liked this. Bobby's part is done, and with it this story. I know it ends on a cliffhanger (as the episode ends that way) but I don't think the storm metaphor extends so well to Season 7 Episode 1, even though all of Season 7 is pretty dark and stormy. And anyway, how many times can one find different ways to say "storm" before you get tired of the metaphor?

But of all the pieces of this story, the ones I enjoyed doing the most were Crowley and Bobby and so, I've decided, my next big story will feature… Crowley and Bobby! Oh what fun that will be. Can't say much more because I'm still working out the details. But stay tuned!

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