A partial-retelling of Revolutionary Girl Utena in poem-form. No need for fandom knowledge but it is helpful for further reference.
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A poem I wrote for one of my classes.
greek chorus.
Low in the sky,
but high in the forest,
the sun beats down
On a beautiful florist.
The florist meets the duelist
Far passed the lyrical forest.
The shadow girls watch,
An unnerving greek chorus.
Even the duelist dressed in garb
and adjourned in flowers,
cowers in fear of the man
Up in that tower.
The sun will come up
and the sun will go down,
it will continue to beat
On such a lyrical forest.
Thank you for reading!!! I would appreciate any critique you are willing to give. (I have to turn this in, sooner rather than later). If you feel weird giving out critique in an Ao3 comment section, I also have a tumblr under the same Name/ or SalzMitWasser.
Also, I privated a bunch of my more vent-heavy works because I was being blackmailed by a dear-friend of mine because he has my Ao3 username and I tend to be a semi-aggressive person in my speaking at least.Query of the Chapter: How do you two-voice poem?(I have an assignment to do and I need help)
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