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The Way It Ends

Summary:

What if one small change made everything better?

"Even though I sealed off my ears with my hands, I still hear ringing when I take them away, and I feel unsteady on my feet as I pick up my gun from where it slid when the bomb detonated."

Notes:

This is an alternate ending I wrote for Allegiant. I originally posted this in January of 2015 on FF.net but decided to move it here since I now have an account here and I've never really been active on FF.net other than posting this fic. Also, this fic will have actual chapters of the book in it, namely because I didn't make a large change/changes but instead changed one little thing that snowballed into the ending completely changing. So take note of what chapter it starts at if you want/need the background info. If you remember enough to either just dive in or figure it out, feel free! Enjoy!
*This fanfiction starts at chapter 47, page 457 and paragraph 42 of Allegiant. Most everything has been unchanged until Chapter 50 and then everything is re-written at paragraph 101 in chapter 51.*

Chapter 1: Chapter 47: Tris (End of)

Notes:

(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

Chapter Text

The noise vibrates in my bones as the small bomb detonates, and the force of the blast throws me sideways, my gun sliding across the floor. Pieces of glass and metal spray through the air, falling to the floor where I lie, stunned. Even though I sealed off my ears with my hands, I still hear ringing when I take them away, and I feel unsteady on my feet as I pick up my gun from where it slid when the bomb detonated.

At the end of the hallway, the guards have caught up with me. They fire, and a bullet hits me in the fleshy part of my arm. I scream, clapping my hand over the wound, and my vision goes spotty at the edges as I throw myself around the corner again, half walking and half stumbling to the blasted-open doors.

Beyond them is a small vestibule with a set of sealed, lockless doors at the other end. Through the windows in those doors I see the Weapons Lab, the even rows of machinery and dark devices and serum vials lit from behind like they're on display. I hear a spraying sound and know that the death serum is floating through the air, but the guards are behind me, and I don't have enough time to put on the suit that will delay its effects.

I also know, just know, that I can survive this.

I step into the vestibule.

Notes:

Some of these chapters will be rather short because the book never had set chapter lengths and so the ones directly from the book follow that and the ones I wrote were written without length in mind and more focus on matching the writing as best I could as a teen.