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Summary:

The reader is a young woman living on the road, making a stop in small-town Colorado when she runs out of money and needs a job. She finds work and lodges with Connie Rogers, a woman distraught by her missing son, Toby, who vanished after killing her husband. Unbeknownst to the reader, Toby hasn't gone far and has taken an interest in the new girl in town.

Chapter 1: One

Notes:

Hi! I haven't written anything in like 3 years but I wanted to start improving my writing. If you recognize this story's premise it's because I published an old version years ago on here titled ‘ignorance’. Since I didn't know much about storytelling at the time, I lost the plot and abandoned it. Very very stupidly I decided to orphan it so I lost access. This time I actually have an outline so I promise, this story will be finished.

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, just don't be mean or I'll cry

Chapter Text

I had assumed that running out of money in the middle of Colorado would be the worst of my problems. My only plan was to get by until I could figure out where to go next. So when I stepped into the old diner on the outskirts of this backwoods town, I wasn’t expecting much beyond the greasy smell of burgers and the dull monotony of small-town life. But the moment I saw Connie Rogers, I knew this place was different. She was a woman wrapped in grief so thick, it was almost tangible—an aura of sorrow that clung to her like a second skin. I had no idea then that my decision to stay would unravel the dark secrets hidden within this place, dragging me into a nightmare I could never have imagined.

The first thing I noticed about Connie was how she moved with a kind of weary precision, like someone who had long since given up on expecting life to be anything other than what it was. She demonstrated how to refill the coffee pot, her motions mechanical, each action executed with practiced ease. I mirrored her movements as best as I could, but the silence between us was suffocating, thickening the air with every passing second.

"How long have you worked here?" I asked, desperate to pierce through the heavy quiet and reach some part of her that wasn’t consumed by grief. Connie paused, her hand hovering over the coffee pot, before glancing at me with eyes that were shadowed by a pain I couldn’t yet comprehend.

"Long enough," she replied curtly, her voice clipped, as if the effort of speaking was almost too much to bear. She turned her attention back to the pot, and the conversation died there, the air between us growing heavier with the weight of everything left unsaid.

I refused to give up. "It's a nice place," I ventured, gesturing vaguely to the worn decor around us.

"Yeah," she muttered, her tone softening just a fraction. "I guess it is."

The diner, Sullivan’s, was a relic of a different time. The floors were scuffed linoleum, dulled by decades of footsteps, and the vinyl booths had long since lost their shine, cracked and worn by countless diners. The scent of sizzling bacon and freshly brewed coffee hung in the air, mingling with the sound of a jukebox playing some forgotten tune from the fifties. Faded photographs adorned the walls, each one a testament to the town’s history, and the low hum of chatter from the regulars created a sense of familiarity that was both comforting and unsettling.

I hadn’t planned on staying. My life for the past year had been one of constant movement, living out of my car as I drifted from one place to another. Initially, I had been running—running from memories that hurt too much to hold onto, from people who could hurt me even more. But over time, I had come to find a strange sort of freedom in my solitude. There was something liberating about being a stranger in a new town, where no one knew your name or your past. After a while, the loneliness became just another part of the scenery, something I barely noticed anymore.

But this place... this town felt different. There was something here, just beneath the surface, that called to me, though I couldn’t yet understand why. 

Connie wasn’t giving me much to work with, so I focused on learning the job. While I was pouring coffee for a group of elderly men seated at the counter, I felt a light tap on my shoulder. Turning around, I was met with the broad grin of a boy who couldn’t have been more than a few years younger than me. His curly hair bounced with every movement, and there was a light in his eyes that felt almost out of place in this quiet, sorrowful town.

"Hey there, newbie," he greeted, his voice warm and teasing as he extended a hand. "Welcome to the glamorous world of diner life. I’m Dante."

I took his hand, finding his energy infectious. His nametag was pinned to a crisp button-up shirt, and like Connie, he wore the standard black uniform with a white waist apron. But where Connie seemed weighed down by some unseen burden, Dante was all lightness and charm. 

“Thanks, I’m (y/n),” I replied, matching his smile.

As Dante introduced himself, I noticed his gaze drift toward Connie, a fleeting sadness passing over his face. My curiosity piqued, I leaned closer. "Is she always like this?" I asked softly, not wanting to intrude too much.

Dante’s grin faded, replaced by a somber expression that seemed out of place on his youthful face. He leaned against the counter, his voice lowering as he spoke. “Connie’s been through a lot,” he began, his tone heavy with empathy. “About a year ago, she lost her daughter in a car accident. Her son was in the car too... survived it, but barely. A few months later, he... snapped. Killed their father, her husband, and then just vanished. No one’s seen him since.”

His words hit me like a punch to the gut. Suddenly, Connie’s closed-off demeanor made sense—she was a woman barely holding it together, living with a pain that was unimaginable. “That’s why she’s like this,” Dante added quietly, his eyes full of a sadness that felt too deep for someone his age.

I nodded, a wave of empathy washing over me. “That’s awful,” I whispered, my heart aching for her. I had my own reasons for running, my own ghosts that haunted me, but what Connie was living with... I couldn’t even begin to fathom it.

Before I could respond, an older man emerged from the back of the diner, his presence commanding immediate attention. He had silver hair and thick glasses perched on the bridge of his nose, and in his hands, he held a neatly folded uniform. “(y/n), your training day is over. You did well,” he said, his voice gruff but not unkind. He handed me the uniform with a nod. “You start tomorrow at 6 a.m.”

I bit the inside of my lip, doubt gnawing at me. “I’m not sure if I can do this,” I confessed, a hint of insecurity creeping into my voice. “I could barely work the register.”

The manager offered a rare, reassuring smile. “You’ll be fine. Connie opens tomorrow, and she’ll be here to help you.”

I nodded, though uncertainty still clung to me. I stole a final glance at Connie, watching as she carefully wiped down a table. Her hair, a rich brown, was cut short just above her shoulders, the ends curling up slightly as if defying the sorrow that weighed her down. But it was her eyes that held me captive—dark, haunted, and distant, as though she was looking at something far beyond the confines of this little diner.

As I left Sullivan’s, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was stepping into something far more complicated than just a new job. The evening air was crisp, a sharp contrast to the warmth of the diner, and as I walked back to the old car that had become my home, a sense of unease settled deep in my bones.

The engine sputtered to life, and I drove through the darkening streets until I found a secluded spot off a quiet service road. The forest loomed on either side of the narrow path, the trees casting long, twisted shadows that seemed to move in the corners of my vision. Parking the car, I settled into the backseat, trying to shake off the unease that had been with me since I arrived in this strange town.

But as I closed my eyes, something flickered in the corner of my vision—movement in the trees, just beyond the reach of the headlights. My heart pounded as I reached for the hunting knife I kept stashed in the glovebox, my fingers curling around the hilt with a grip that betrayed my fear. I held it close, my eyes scanning the dark forest, searching for any sign of what might be out there.

Eventually, exhaustion pulled me into a fitful sleep, the knife still clutched tightly in my hand. Even in the safety of the locked car, I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was out there, watching, waiting. I only hoped that whatever lurked in the shadows would keep its distance until morning.