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Though the Land is Black and Barren

Summary:

An adaptation of the famous car chase scene in Adolescence of Utena into a romantic ballad a la The Highwayman.

We belong in places yonder; come with me and take my hand.

Originally written for Two Girl Revolution, an Utena and Anthy zine.

Notes:

(See the end of the work for notes.)

Work Text:

Though the sky abloom with sunset
 Gleams upon the towers grand,
Though the air is filled with fragrance,
 Though the roses wreath the land,
Though you speak of wondrous power
 In this garden where we stand,
We belong in places yonder—
 Yonder— yonder—
We belong in places yonder;
 Come with me and take my hand.

While you pause with hesitation,
 Vast devices hear my plea:
Grant me strength for revolution!
 Bare my spirit! Remake me!
Gleaming pink perfected chassis,
 Wheels to bear us fast and free—
If you would not leave me rusting—
 Rusting— rusting—
If you would not leave me rusting,
 Take my wheel and turn my key.

Caution! Caution! warns the street-sign—
 Danger! Danger! screams the road—
Still our drive is unrelenting,
 Still our grit shall not erode,
Still our wheel holds steady as we
 Leave in dust our old abode,
All the while, our engine purring—
 Purring— purring—
All the while, our engine purring
 Like a prayer or an ode.

Closely clinging to our dust-trail,
 Jealous rivals swiftly swarm—
Left and right, they close upon us
 Like a dark and deadly storm—
Growling burnt-black engines glut with
 Rage as hot as love is warm,
Chasing, clashing, crashing, crushing—
 Crushing— crushing—
Chasing, clashing, crashing, crushing,
 Fracturing your noble form.

Ere the weight of envy ends us,
 Lo: a helping hand is found!
Dreams like ours draw the blessing
 Of our fellow coffin-bound!
Someday they might follow after;
 With their strength, we now rebound—
Once again, our pistons pumping—
 Pumping— pumping—
Once again, our pistons pumping
 To our final battleground.

Bright against the darkened heavens
 Looms the Prince’s halls pristine:
Silver spires pure and gleaming,
 Tar-black wheels with maddened mien.
Though his glory may surround us,
 Through the cracks in his machine
We shall carve a shining passage—
 Passage— passage—
We shall carve a shining passage
 To our place in morrows green.

Even as the voice of power
 Chastens us from thrones on high,
Even as his tank-treads strip us
 Bare beneath the deep blue sky,
Pedal to the floor, we hasten
 Through the avid tempest’s eye,
Piercing through his veil of roses—
 Roses— roses—
Piercing through his veil of roses
 Into freedom, you and I.

Though the land is black and barren,
 Bare of any fly or crow,
Though the cliffs loom bleak and daunting,
 Though the sky hangs grey and low,
Though there is no map or highway
 Showing us where we may go,
We shall forge our own way onward—
 Onward— onward—
We shall forge our own way onward;
 We shall be the seeds that grow.

Notes:

This was my tribute to the most famous scene in the Adolescence of Utena movie, expressed as a romantic ballad in the tradition of The Highwayman. I’ve always admired how that poem sets the scene and creates a sense of motion using a meter that mimics the galloping of a horse, so here, I wanted to do something similar with the rhythm of a car engine. Hope y'all enjoy it!

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