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and if i want you (like i said i'd never do)

Summary:

On the night after Caine's worst adventure yet, Jax is left to sit with his thoughts. Pomni extends him an olive branch.

(Written in screenplay/script format)

Notes:

i would hold my breath & sit down next to you

i don't like my writing. i'm a film student who's been taking some screenwriting classes recently and i've learned that writing dialogue somehow comes easier to me in script format LMAO. i might try to recreate this in prose in the future. i hope you can enjoy what i've written, even if it's short and sweet. i love these characters and really wanted to capture them accurately. this takes place the night after the events of episode 7.

I love funnybunny romantically and platonically, so you can interpret this work either way. even though I technically wrote it with romance in mind, nothing overtly romantic happens.

sorry. enough yapping. enjoy.

 

title from crying during sex by ethel cain
(im just realizing how fucked the formatting looks on mobile, i sincerely apologize, lower text size to 50% for it to look normal!)

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:


               INT. TENT

               The circus is quiet. It has its loud and quiet moments
               normally, but this quiet is different. Darker.. more final.
               It's nighttime- or the artificial excuse for "night" Caine
               makes. The circus tent lights are dim. Everyone is in their
               rooms. Jax sits on one of the seating area's many colorful
               couches. He looks defeated- tired.

               Pomni wanders through the tent, groggy but sleepless. She
               catches Jax out of the corner of her eye. She looks around,
               unsure, but eventually makes her way to him. If he notices
               her approaching, he doesn't react. Pomni reaches the seating
               area.

                                   POMNI
                         Can't sleep?

                                   JAX
                             (Scoffs)
                         Yeah. Something like that.

               Pomni hesitates. Then asks-

                                   POMNI
                         Can I sit?

               Jax bristles, but any emotion evident in his face and body is
               gone after an instant.

                                   JAX
                         Be my guest.

               Pomni sits, farthest away from Jax on the couch. They sit.
               The silence is heavy.

                                   POMNI
                         So...

               She wants to say something, but before she can even get a
               word out, Jax tuts. His hand grips the couch arm.

                                   JAX
                         I'm not doing this right now,
                         Pomni.

                                   POMNI
                         ..Huh?

                                   JAX
                         Oh, come on. You know what I mean.
                         Your stupid therapy bull.
                         Whatever you have to say to me-
                         about how it's all gonna be okay or-
                         or whatever, I don't wanna hear it.

               Pomni watches as Jax talks, growing increasingly worried. She
               inches closer to him on the couch.

                                   JAX
                         We're stuck here. We'll be here
                         until the end of time. Nothing we
                         can do. Nothing we could have ever
                         done. No talk that can get us out
                         of here.

               Jax pants- his breathing has picked up. He raises a hand to
               his chest to calm himself.

                                   POMNI
                         I just- I'm worried.

               Jax looks at Pomni. She's slouched in on herself, but
               significantly closer to JAX than she was moments before.

                                   Pomni
                         I'm worried about you.

                                   Jax
                         Don't be. I'm good.

               Jax looks away again. Pomni's brows furrow.

                                   POMNI
                         I'm not an idiot. I can tell when
                         my friends aren't okay.

                                   JAX
                             (Scoffs)
                         You think we're friends? After I-
                         after everything? Have you lost
                         your mind?

               Jax looks at his lap, at a loss.

                                   JAX
                         Jesus. You don't know when to quit.

               Pomni hesitates for a moment, finding her words... then says-

                                   POMNI
                         You know... someone told me one
                         time that it's not pointless. Being
                         here. And that- you need to cherish
                         the people around you.

               This hits Jax harder than Pomni expected it to- like they
               were words he didn't want to hear. He flinches, expression
               crumpling, not daring to make eye contact with her.

               Pomni inches her hand closer, closer- until her fingers are
               over Jax's. Not completely, just the loose touch of her
               gloved fingers to his. Jax flinches, moves his hand towards
               himself- but doesn't completely pull away.

               They sit like that for a while. Silent, lightly intertwined-
               until Pomni takes a leap and finally interlaces their
               fingers.

               Jax inhales sharply, but doesn't fight it. Lets his hand be
               held. Pomni sneaks a look at him- His pupils dilate slightly
               as he continues to look away. He looks even more exhausted
               than he was before, but calmer. The air doesn't seem as tense
               anymore.

               Pomni takes a deep breath before she speaks again, breaking
               their silence.

                                   POMNI
                         And- and I know maybe you don't,
                         but I.. do cherish you. I do. Maybe
                         that's insane, considering the way
                         you act.

               She gets up from the couch. Jax's palm is cold where
               Pomni's hand once was. He finally looks at her, confused.
               Pomni's gaze holds finality.

                                   POMNI
                         So when you're done with your pity
                         party, I'm here. To talk. For real
                         this time. Come find me.

                                   JAX
                         ...I-

               Pomni is already walking away, leaving Jax alone in the dimly
               lit tent- just him and his thoughts. Him and his dangerous
               brain.

               He lifts his hand- the same one that pushed Pomni away after
               she hugged him... the same one that just held hers.

               Exhaling, Jax brings his knees to his chest, curling up in
               himself. The silence, his loneliness- it doesn't feel as
               scary as it did moments before.

Notes:

int = interior btw lol, it's just a setting heading for a scene in a script.
neither of these characters belong to me, nor does the story. i am making zero profit off of this work.

please tell me what you think PLEASE! i'd love feedback. did i capture the characters well? did the dialogue flow okay? anything else you wish for? lmk :)

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