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Tetro Blue Rewrite (What if?)

Summary:

A rewrite of Tetro blue, chapter 3 and onwards.

I really disliked a ton of the writing for 3-5, so I wanted to try to fix what I didn’t like.

This is just for fun I am not the best writer, but I do accept criticism if you have any!

Also, I do not support Von. I am just gonna adopt these characters as my OCs.😭

Notes:

I made a ton of changes so for a little context I will lay some things out at the beginning of each chapter.

Chapter 1: Info

Chapter Text

Chapter 3 ——————————————————

After chapter 2 feelings:

Tei is very upset with Ikeda because of the whole bleeding thing.
Similarly, Yaitabashi is upset with Kumada because of the bleeding thing and is mourning Mutsko.
Yokoi doesn’t really know how to feel but still sometimes hangs out with Ikeda and Kumada(Kumada gets mad tho) because she wants to try to keep them safe!
Maekawa is still upset at all the Bleeding but she’s atleast starting to be better with Hirose(as in not trying to hurt him anymore.)
Rest are similar to og chapter 3

EXTRA INFO:

-Also Ikeda isn’t racist bc I literally don’t see the point in that. He’s just really annoying in au this LMAO.

-I’ll be trying to give some characters who don’t really have any backstory some stuff.(cough, cough, Isoda and Yokoi)

-Different victims/killers,trials, and motives(I didn’t the ones from before)

-Some things may be not written specifically(for example Kumada’s spotlight BUT they’re still important so I will most likely just say what they are and maybe a brief summary. I highly recommend watching the actual video(s) though, they’ll provide a lot of context )
-Chapters will switch POVs ,additionally some will be written in 3rd person while others may not. ( This may not be used though, maybe only for games/motives??)

I am kinda bad at writing, so I apologize in advance if my grammar or spelling is wrong! I just wanted to write down how I would change the chapters I didn’t really like for fun so please be mindful of that! (I do accept criticism fully though!)