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1. byeast ep.15 critiques + writing advice by eroseye

   Fandoms: Cookie Run (Video Game), Cookie Run: Kingdom  

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   17 Mar 2026

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   • Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
   • Pure Vanilla Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • White Lily Cookie | Saint Lily Cookie
   • Golden Cheese Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Dark Cacao Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Hollyberry Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Shadow Milk Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Silent Salt Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Nox Black Salt | Silent Salt Cookie's Horse
   • Burning Spice Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Mystic Flour Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Eternal Sugar Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Ancient Heroes (Cookie Run)
   • Beast Cookies (Cookie Run)
   • Legendary Cookies (Cookie Run)
   • Dark Enchantress Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • The Ultimate Cookie (Cookie Run)
   • Truthless Recluse (Cookie Run)
   • Cookie run - Character
   • Beast-Yeast (Cookie Run)
   • Post-Beast Yeast Episode 12 (Cookie Run)
   • Post-Beast-Yeast Episode 8 (Cookie Run)
   • Post-Beast-Yeast Episode 10 (Cookie Run)
   • Game: Cookie Run: Kingdom
   • Rants
   • I'm Bad at Tagging
   • Please Don't Kill Me
   • I Wrote This Instead of Sleeping
   • I Wrote This While Listening to Yaelokre's Music
   • How Do I Tag
   • I Don't Even Know
   • Why Did I Write This?
   • Epic
   • Cool
   • I'm Sorry William Shakespeare
   • I'm so cool
   • Dare i say the coolest?
   • i love milk
   • How many cows does it take to fill up a 1 litre carton of milk?
   • Drinking milk while writing this
   • Beast-Yeast Episode 15
   • Post-Beast Yeast Episode 15
   • Beast-Yeast Episode 15 Spoilers

   Summary

   Hello!! Right now, you're looking at a silly and innocuous (I hope) series of constructive criticism for Cookie: Run Kingdom's most recent update. I believe that no further introduction is required./ref

   But before you proceed, I would like to apprise you all that:

   1. I'm no professional, and the following critique is bound to have TONS of flaws. I wrote this with the plain intention to share the thoughts that have been hedging my brain since the latest Beast-Yeast episode dropped.
   2. To those who have not caught up with episode 15 of byeast, prepare to be met with loads of SPOILERS!!!!!

   I'm always open to feedback and suggestions.

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