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i hear the rocks and stones, echoing my song

Summary:

By Eridian standards, Grace is disgusting and terrifying. That’s what Rocky is thinking about at least as Grace trips over a storage container that he left out in his own path.

This creature that should be terrifying and disgusting is really quite clumsy. It’s almost… cute.

Grace nodded, a similar gesture to Eridian jazz hands before walking away and proceeding to trip on the exact same storage cube. Yes, Grace was cute, Rocky decided, clumsy and cute.

or the rocky yearning fic

Notes:

title from wait for me from the hadestown musical and mostly chosen because every version of the 'this is the one universe where orpheus turning around saves eurydice' posts hit me like a truck /pos

no ai was used in the making of this fic or any of my fics ever, i would literally rather start playing league of legends then use ai (honestly it would probably be just as toxic to my health)

Chapter 1

Notes:

(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

Chapter Text

Grace and humans in general are odd, to say the least. They have no protective outer shell, the only thing like it is inside of them and even then Rocky could easily crush Grace’s bones. Humans are squishy and malleable, if Rocky were to press ever so delicately into Grace, his protective layer, skin it’s called, would stretch and move. They’re loud, Rocky can hear Grace’s organs as they work, hear his heart beat, his lungs contract, muscles move his food through him (gross, gross, gross). He wouldn’t be able to hear that on another Eridian unless he was very close, if they were touching or tapping against each other. Something… intimate.

Most things on Erid have protective shells, but there are things that don’t. They’re few and far between but all of them are predators who’ve found different ways to bore into protective layers. They’ve progressed in their society enough to not have to worry about them as much anymore but most of them could easily kill an Eridian if they wanted to. By Eridian standards, Grace is disgusting and terrifying.

That’s what Rocky is thinking about at least as Grace trips over a storage container that he left out in his own path. He almost falls flat onto what he calls his ‘face’ before catching himself and straightening up. It was one of the first things Rocky noticed after he learned this alien’s name was ‘grace’ of all things. He was anything but graceful, he was like a pebble 𝅘𝅥𝅮♩♫♬ when it is first born and getting its legs underneath it. He trips over nothing, slams his body into the sides of things he should clearly be able to see, and flails around in zero g.

This creature that should be terrifying and disgusting is really quite clumsy. It’s almost… cute.

“Why Grace so not grace, question?” Rocky asks in his stilted grammar. That was another thing, humans could be smart but their memory was terrible. While Rocky could just remember the words spoken to him by Grace and thus overtime figure out context and grammar, Grace had to use the thinking machine and take notes. It was just easier if Rocky accommodated him and well it’s not really like he minded, Eridians liked efficiency. (Some of his own grammar sneaked in sometimes but it wasn’t like he could match the tone of Grace’s voice that indicated a question anyway).

Grace reacted in a way that Rocky was beginning to understand meant embarrassment in humans. Blood flowed to his face and his claw came up to scratch at the back of his neck, “Um,” he said, a human filler word. “I don’t know the science behind it that well, buddy, I think it has something to do with my pɹˌə͡ʊpɹɪəsˈɛpʃən?” he said, the tilt of his words indicated he wasn’t sure.

“New word,” Rocky said instantly, Grace had only just recently found a way for them to communicate, they had new words often.

Grace thought for a moment, he often fidgeted when he did, Rocky could relate to that at least. “It’s the sense for where my body is in space and how much force I’m using, things like that,” he explained.

“Understand, the Eridian word is proprioception,” Rocky said and Grace moved his head around for a moment before finding his thinking machine and picking it up. Humans' sense of sight seemed interesting and useful at times and annoying other times. If Grace could sense like an Eridian he would have known his thinking machine was right behind him the whole time, he wouldn’t have had to turn to perceive it.

Rocky waited as Grace took a moment to add the word into his translator program, he had sort of explained how it worked to Rocky but a lot of it involved things Rocky didn’t have a concept for. All of it was rather standard for thinking machines apparently, it just made Rocky desperately want to take it apart and examine it.

“Why Grace proprioception bad, question?” Rocky asked. He couldn’t deny his own curiosity, was this just a thing with humans? Was there something different about Grace specifically? Eridians could be clumsy as well but it wasn’t very common. Was it common amongst humans? Or was Grace just special?

Grace hummed a singular note, another filler word and indication of thinking, “I’m not… sure,” he said, his tone and his stilling was something he did often too. Like he was paying attention but not, like his mind was trapped somewhere else maybe. It was another moment before he spoke again, “There’s different reasons humans can have bad proprioception, but I’m not sure why I do. I never really thought about it, I guess. Some humans are just clumsy.”

Rocky made a note in his mind to ask later about the different reasons, Grace would probably have to look it up anyway because of his terrible memory. It was lucky that the humans thought ahead to put all of their knowledge onto the ship. “Understand,” he told Grace.

Grace nodded, a similar gesture to Eridian jazz hands before walking away and proceeding to trip on the exact same storage cube. Yes, Grace was cute, Rocky decided, clumsy and cute.

Notes:

i was debating for a long time whether to post this fic all at once as a like one shot or to post it as chapters and as you can probably tell i decided on chapters. i was mostly against the idea of a chaptered fic because i have it in my head that the chapters should be all the same length but honestly? whooooo cares, i know i don't when reading a chaptered fic so why should i? anyway that's also ur heads up (tbf it also ended up being wayyyy longer than i thought it would be)

i got the idea for this fic really not long after i posted my previous gracerocky fic but i didn't start really working on it until the beginning of last month. the fic is basically finished aside from editing so chapters will be posted every 2 to 3 days to give me some time to do that <3

originally the idea for this fic was a sort of 5 to 1 thing of like 'every time rocky could have confessed and the one time he actually did' before it evolved to be more the times rocky fell in love before it just kind of blossomed from there, now i've just been calling it the rocky falling in love/the rocky yearner fic, sidenote really surprised yearning isn't it's own ao3 tag

anywayyyy specifically about this chapter i don't know how realistic it is for them to have predators like i'm describing on erid and i'm pretty sure somewhere andy weir has implied that the eridians just like killed off their natural predators to extinction? but well i wanted rocky and the eridians to have a similar reaction to grace as grace did with him in the book so... anyway i imagine the eridians reaction to humans is kinda like how we would react to an intelligent extremely acidic slime, ew and also holy shit if that thing touches me it will melt my skin off (also i say we in general but probably not most of us, we're writing/reading gracerocky here, most of us are probably monsterfuckers)

also i use pebble like we might use baby, like we might say a baby horse then eridians would say a pebble horse kind of thing anyway, i know pebble doesn't make sense really because realistically it would be translated to baby but i love the pebble headcanon stuff so much so i have decided to not care

the untranslated word here is a creature on erid that i debated on making up a name for but i'm so bad with names i just decided against it, essentially it's just an animal that stands pretty quickly after birth like deer or horse, i almost just said pebble here but i honestly don't think eridian pebbles are standing that quickly, mostly because they take sooo long to develop, grace is teaching like 30 year old eridians at the end of the book and they're supposed to be about equivalent to middle schoolers i think so i would imagine they take about the same amount or maybe even more time for them to stand up as it does humans

words that grace says but rocky doesn't recognize yet are written in IPA or International Phonetic Alphabet which i've seen other fic authors do but i can't be sure where it started, there's a few translators online that you can copy and paste into that will read it out to you if you have trouble with it, generally though as far as i remember most are translated after by rocky, also sorry if i explained proprioception terribly lol

anyway thanks for reading, any comments or kudos are deeply appreciated, and sorry for yapping so much in the end notes sdkjhfd, come bug me on my tumblr if you want