TWJB
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"... Because seeing Bella, no matter what the circumstances, was always a good thing. Even as she was then, all hollowed out and pale, like a ghost. She was shockingly thin, with dark bags under her eyes framed by flat, dark hair hanging limply on the sides of her face. Her eyes, which had once shone with delight and flashed with intuition, now stood as two decaying statues of an old, forgotten monument, crumbling against gravity and the wars which left their empire to rot.
Her face lit dimly with a spark of enthusiasm, and the edges of her mouth twitched up in a poor mockery of her old grin.
“Hey, Jacob!” Her smile widened and became more familiar.
I felt something click into place, like a key in a lock
I’d forgotten how easy it was to love Bella Swan."
I took issue with how smeyer treated my boy, as many of us have, and I took it upon myself to re-write the series from Jacob's POV and fix some of the problems I had. This is basically a head canon of how I would write twilight, were I ever given such a job - which I would like to clarify; nobody asked for this. JacobxBella AU where Jake imprints but it's sorta... different? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
*EDITED&REVISED* (just not the author's notes lol)Series
- Part 1 of twilight, but different
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Growing Pains by kablack
Fandoms: Twilight Series - Stephenie Meyer, Twilight Series - All Media Types
26 Oct 2021
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I decided to give Bella more spine. I hated how she allow Edward order her around and tell her what to do. Everything under the pretense of "her own good", like she was a stupid girl uncapable to make decisions for herself. Said that, Edward´s character is no villainized. I don´t think he is a bad person per se, just to set in his ways and he found a codependant person who allow him to get away with his already controlling personality.
And I´m big fan of Jacob. To me he was the healthier choice for her, he let her to be herself and support her in her choices, and she loved him too. The Renesme solution of SM felt too forced and really creepy to me. -
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Charlie got Bella the professional help she needed when Edward took off. Now Edward's back - and she's different. AU New Moon - after Volterra - and Eclipse. Mostly in-character, Edward's not villainized.
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- Part 2 of Better Now