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  1. frieren

    I do my best with geography when I can, but I have only been to New York a handful of times, but never for very long.
    And honestly, the only reason I put the Chelsea Market is because I did the same walk in reverse— walked to the café I based it on from Chelsea, after eating my kimbap from the Korean grocery store there (see, I do have some realism.) I guess because I tend to walk a lot when I travel it didn’t occur to me to go somewhere closer.

    And yeah, I guess I should have looked at the subway maps better! I do always try to be as accurate as possible with details like that (because I know it throws me off when people make mistakes with places or things I know well) but hey, nobody’s perfect. Especially not the NYC subway when I compare it to Seoul or London :P

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    1. Thank you for your kind response. I tried really hard to allow for some wiggle room, and didn't mention a few things for artistic interpretation. You were kind of close on a lot of stuff. That's why I tried to include compliments, and specifically say what bothered me based on personal experience - as opposed to objectively.

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      1. frieren

        And I appreciate that about you! If I came off defensive it wasn’t intentional, I just like to explain myself :)

        I am going to change Midtown to Manhattan at least, that won’t affect the story but at least fixes *that* mistake lol

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