Comment on A Hot Summer's Night - My Thoughts' On You

  1. 1-800-i-ship-it (bluris) Thu 13 Jul 2023 04:40AM UTC

    [Bruce flicked his tongue over his lips, wetting them, and an image flared to life in his head. Clark’s warm fingers caressing his cheeks, hot tongue swiping urgently across his parched lips, seeking entry.

    Bruce shook his head and tugged his concentration back to the matter at hand, watching over Gotham. A slight breeze fluttered his cape, a bearer of false promises. Instead of refreshing coolness, the wind intensified the heat and humidity, and hotness clung to him, heavy and inescapable.] omg I love how you wrote these parts!! Clark is truly living rent-free in Bruce’s head, it’s so funny xD love the wording here!!

    [Suddenly detecting a presence, Bruce barked out sharply, “Don’t!”

    But it was too late.

    Strong gentle arms pulled him into a warm embrace that was utterly different from the atmospheric heat, and Bruce felt foolish for being so distracted.

    “Missed me?”

    A soft chuckle, a breath of air and a familiar pair of lips brushed against Bruce’s own, teasing and no intention of deepening the kiss.] this is so them you captured their dynamic so well haha xD so cute <3

    [Bruce sighed and bit that irritating pair of lips before pulling back. He then failed disastrously in his attempt to produce a fearsome Bat-glare.] pffft hahahaha xD this was so funny, seems like he isn’t immune to Clark, poor Bruce xD

    [“Penny One, sent me to fetch you.”
    “I’m not a stick.”] LMAO I’m dead this was so funny I see what you did there xD

    And nice promise Clark 👀 looks like they r gonna have a fun spicy time xD and ofc Bruce specifies to the T

    Relatable it’s super hot where I am right now too, the summer heat has no mercy rip

    Thanks for sharing your wonderful writing!! <3

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