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  1. rosewaterangel on Chapter 5 Fri 29 Sep 2023 11:19AM UTC

    Hello! I actually have a condition that raises my heartrate that high regularly and keeps my blood pressure extremely low. 87/63 is just past the threshold of hypotension, which isn't great but he wouldn't have died. I don't want to sound defensive but Leo's experiences with disability in this story are directly taken from my own. On a bad day, this is something that has happened to me. HOWEVER I dont have a pacemaker and I should have considered that! I will resolve this in later chapters, you've given me a wonderful, terrible idea :) I'm glad you've been enjoying the story and I appreciate your concern!

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    1. Bookdragonz on Chapter 5 Fri 29 Sep 2023 04:11PM UTC

      Good to know! As long as you have valid backing I am totally okay with it! Thank you for taking time to explain :)

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      1. rosewaterangel on Chapter 5 Sat 30 Sep 2023 11:22PM UTC

        No problem! I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story. Next chapter should be coming out soon! I'm almost done writing it

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