Comment on A Flash Of Subelements- The Senju Uzumaki Heir

  1. Makuro767 on Chapter 5 Mon 02 Oct 2023 09:21AM UTC

    Also. I mean no disrespect. This is your story after all. These are all just ideas I though would suite Minato's reputation as a deadly Shinobi more.

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    1. Joestar94 on Chapter 5 Mon 02 Oct 2023 09:55AM UTC

      No I totally get it and thank you. Ive decided to add that little tidbit to the story. But Hiraishin wont be the only plot point in this story. There will be a couple of surprises I’ll reveal in future chapters. Needless to say that Naruto will be pretty op during shippuden if not already. I’ll be posting the next chapter soon. Im still only half way through writing chapter 9 and hopefully I’ll be able to finish. Again thanks for your suggestions.

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