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  1. Dunesday_Art on Chapter 3 Fri 25 Jul 2025 10:16PM UTC

    Beautiful. Just beautiful.

    I love the tension buildup and the debate of the plan of action. It's a very real concern for someone like Petunia to not want to bring someone like her parents into the conflict thanks to the fears of them dying as well, not to mention how hard it'll be to keep the truth from her parents. Keeping the truth from her father'll be an extreme sport, and with her mother being home soon keeping the truth'll become an Olympic event that I can't wait to watch. I also love how Petunia managed to get herself into trouble. Not only did she mess up, she's a potential suspect. She's a little something I like to call "Royally Fucked™" :D

    Though, I am starting to notice a frequent pattern of Petunia being referred to with he/him pronouns. In future chapters, I suggest combing through to make sure anytime someone refers to Petunia, they use she/her.

    Also, I'm very curious as to what Grace meant when she threatened to chuck Circle back into the pit she found her in... :Oc

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    1. MrSpooks on Chapter 3 Sat 26 Jul 2025 01:29AM UTC

      It’s likely because they’re translating this from their native language into English, meaning words like He/Him/She/Her will sometimes be translated into the opposite wording. It’s how it is sometimes.

      So yeah, completely not their fault, it’s just translation issues. So just correct it in your mind and you’ll be fine

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      1. Dunesday_Art on Chapter 3 Sat 26 Jul 2025 01:34AM UTC

        Oh yeah totally, I'm not really too mad about it. I kinda figured something like it would happen ngl, it's just a thing that happens *shrug* :/

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    3. SrSusanito on Chapter 3 Sat 26 Jul 2025 07:38AM UTC

      Thanks for pointing out the errors in the pronouns "he/him." I hadn't realized it until I read this.

      Basically, I write all the chapters in Spanish (my native language) and then use chatgpt to translate everything into English. I then run that same translation through Google Translate and, using my basic knowledge of English, correct anything that sounds odd.

      But from what I can see, I've missed several mistakes. I just hope I'm more attentive next time. 😖

      (I'm even using Google Translate to write this answer. What a pain!)

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