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  1. byeast ep.15 critiques + writing advice by

    Fandoms: Cookie Run (Video Game), Cookie Run: Kingdom  

    17 Mar 2026

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    Hello!! Right now, you're looking at a silly and innocuous (I hope) series of constructive criticism for Cookie: Run Kingdom's most recent update. I believe that no further introduction is required./ref

    But before you proceed, I would like to apprise you all that:

    1. I'm no professional, and the following critique is bound to have TONS of flaws. I wrote this with the plain intention to share the thoughts that have been hedging my brain since the latest Beast-Yeast episode dropped.
    2. To those who have not caught up with episode 15 of byeast, prepare to be met with loads of SPOILERS!!!!!

    I'm always open to feedback and suggestions.

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    English
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    Chapters:
    1/1
    Comments:
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    Kudos:
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