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Phantom Thieves of Hearts: The Series Episode #2 - "The Woman Called Naoto Shirogane"

Summary:

Set between Okumura and Niijima's Palace, this is my pitch for an ongoing television series about the Phantom Thieves of Hearts.

In the second episode of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts: The Series, Special Guest Star Naoto Shirogane joins the thieves in stealing the heart of her archnemesis! But with a ticking clock and the boys missing, can the female Phantom Thieves steal his heart in time?

Notes:

To repeat some notes from the first episode on how the show would function:

1. Although referred to in the script as "Ren", my intent is to never say the protagonist's name, not unlike the tv series Fleabag.

2. Assume all Confidants have been maxed, though Ren went the friendship route with everyone. Party members will still use their tier 1 Personas however.

3. The "series regulars" would be: Ren, Ann, Ryuji, Morgana, Yusuke, Makoto, Futaba, Haru, with Kawakami and Sojiro

4. The intent is to keep as strictly to canon as possible, though some concessions are made to help the show flow. Obviously, having Naoto show up breaks quite a bit of the game's usual logic. But in my defense, what show that's a spinoff/sequel/adaptation doesn't try to squeeze in a cameo as early as possible?

Chapter 1: Act 1

Chapter Text

EXT. TOKYO POLICE STATION. MORNING.

 

Makoto walks up to the entrance of the police station, looking nervous.

 

MAKOTO

(to herself)

Focus up, Niijima. You’ve got this. It’s no big deal. Just step one towards your-

 

Makoto’s phone goes off. (Ideally, her ringtone is the theme to Buchimaru's tv show, but that's not a thing, as far as we know). It’s Ann. Makoto jumps, as it scares her. She picks it up.

 

MAKOTO

Ann?

 

INT. NIPPON BUDOKAN. SAME TIME.

 

Ann is pushing and shoving in a tight line.

 

ANN

They dropped surprise Risette tickets for tonight’s sold out show! I need you down here!

 

MAKOTO

Wh-what?

 

ANN

Risette. Her concert tonight is sold out, but they’re releasing standing room tickets for the show! Are you able to get here?

 

MAKOTO

I… I’m sorry. I have my police officer shadow thing today that Sae set up.

 

ANN

Oh right! I’m sorry. I’ll snag you tickets if I can! Haru and Futaba are in too, it’ll be a girl’s night!

 

MAKOTO

That sounds wonderful Ann, I hope it works out.

 

ANN

Have fun!

 

Ann hangs up. Makoto hangs up, disappointed that she no longer has an excuse to stall. She walks up the stairs.

 

INT. POLICE STATION ENTRANCE. MOMENTS LATER.

 

Makoto walks in to see a bustling police station. She looks around a little, to see a young woman, about 20 years old, sitting on the bench looking intense. NAOTO SHIROGANE has blue hair and is dressed in a navy peacoat, giving her a slight androgenous look, though she is still feminine. Makoto recognizes her instantly, and bows out of nerves.

 

MAKOTO

Detective Shirogane!

 

Naoto looks up and sees Makoto, and takes her a second to register it.

 

NAOTO

Oh, you’re Niijima-sama’s sister, aren’t you?

 

MAKOTO

Yes… yes. I’m Makoto Niijima.

 

NAOTO

It is a pleasure to meet you, Niijima-san.

 

MAKOTO

The pleasure is all mine! I get to meet the original Detective Prince!

 

Makoto instantly looks ashamed for saying that. Naoto smiles a little, it breaks the tension.

 

NAOTO

It’s really not a big deal, don’t worry. People here used to tease me about my history, as a consulting detective back in high school. But I’m over it now. A… a friend. A group of friends, really, helped me realize that it doesn't define me.

 

Naoto starts leading Makoto back to her desk.

 

MAKOTO

Oh, okay. So can I ask about that time? When you were The Detective Prince?

 

Naoto looks hesitant

 

NAOTO

Yes…

 

MAKOTO

What happened in the Inaba case? I’ve studied it for a long time, I know you were involved, but I just don’t understand the time-

 

Makoto sees Naoto’s serious look has returned, and drops the question.

 

MAKOTO

I’m sorry.

 

NAOTO

It’s… it’s okay. The Inaba case… is a lot. Maybe some other time, okay Niijima-san?

 

MAKOTO

Okay.

 

INT. NIPPON BUDOKAN . MOMENTS LATER.

 

Ann gets to the front of the line, only to see them pull out a “SOLD OUT” sign out front. Ann screams a guttural, primal scream of anger.

 

ANN

What do you mean, “Sold out”?

 

The attendant just shrugs. Ann calls Futaba

 

ANN

Futaba? I’m on my way. I wasn’t able to get tickets, and we need a plan. Call Haru, we’ll meet at LeBlanc.

 

Futaba laughs.

 

FUTABA (O.C.)

On it.

 

INT. LEBLANC. LATER.

 

Sojiro is hard at work while Futaba is slamming away at her keyboard as fast as her fingers will move. Haru is there, drinking coffee extremely delicately. It's the afternoon, business is slow. Ann walks in, in a hurry.

 

ANN

Futaba! What's the sitch?

(Looks behind the counter)

Oh, hi Boss!

 

SOJIRO

Hi Ann. I take it something important is happening?

 

Sojiro gives a wink

 

ANN

Oh! No, nothing like that.

 

HARU

We're trying to get Risette tickets for tonight.

 

FUTABA

It'll be my first concert ever! I wouldn't want it to be anyone but her. 

 

SOJIRO

That sounds great!

 

ANN

Where's-

 

SOJIRO

He's out with Ryuji and Yusuke. Apparently Yusuke needed them for a project. Won't be back until late.

 

ANN

Oh, okay. Well, at least that's three less tickets to worry about.

 

HARU

Sadly I worry even our four will be difficult.

 

ANN

That’s why we’ve got Futaba! She can get us anything.

 

Ann looks over at Futaba, who looks frustrated.

 

ANN

Fu...taba?

 

Futaba snaps out of it.

 

FUTABA

Sorry. Risette keeps her tickets entirely off-line, which makes this extremely difficult. Zero online footprint. No resellers, nothing. This isn't going to be easy.

 

HARU

Oh no…

 

ANN

No! We’re not giving up yet! I’m sure one of my modelling connections knows Risette.

 

INT. POLICE STATION. AROUND THE SAME TIME.

 

Naoto reaches her desk. She pulls up a seat for Makoto, and motions for her to sit down. Naoto takes off her peacoat, she’s wearing a men’s button up.

 

NAOTO

I do apologize, today is a terrible day for you to visit.

 

MAKOTO
Oh? Why is that?

 

NAOTO

We are running out of time on a large case, and I am sorry, but I am going to be called away frequently. Do you understand?

 

MAKOTO

Yes, I do. I am my sister’s… well, sister, after all.

 

Naoto smiles a little at her lame joke.

 

NAOTO

Yes, I suppose so. Are you ready for a tour?

 

MAKOTO

Of course!

 

Makoto stands up, excitedly.

 

NAOTO

Follow me.

 

Naoto leads her around the precinct.

 

NAOTO

Your father worked here, correct?

 

MAKOTO

Yes.

 

NAOTO

I never met him, but whenever Niijima-sama is around, they speak very highly of him.

 

MAKOTO

Thank you.

 

NAOTO

Have you been to the station often?

 

MAKOTO

Not since I was a very little girl. He didn't like us coming around very often.

 

NAOTO

I can understand that. Even though my parents intended on me carrying on the Shirogane legacy as detectives, they did not let me near their cases that often.

 

Makoto is not quite sure how to reply, when a uniformed officer comes up to Naoto.

 

OFFICER

Shirogane! He’s agreed to speak with you!

 

Naoto looks at her watch

 

NAOTO

With only hours to spare, why now?

(to Makoto)

I apologize, Niijima-san. This is what I was referring to earlier. If you want to go, I would completely understand. If you do not mind waiting, I’ll meet you back at my desk.

 

MAKOTO

Oh… okay.

 

Naoto leaves with the uniformed officer. Makoto starts to walk back to the desk. Persona 4 song “Who’s There?” begins playing, as Makoto contemplates what to do. She decides to follow Naoto.

 

EXT. WATERFRONT. SAME TIME.

 

A photoshoot is going on, as a model, MIKA, in a gorgeous dress is posing on the pier. Ann, sweaty from running here and from the morning, runs just up to the photoshoot. Haru and Futaba are just behind her. Mika notices Ann and is equal parts confused and enjoying it.

 

MIKA

Ann-senpai? What are you doing here? Looking like that?

 

Ann looks down at herself, and though slightly disgusted, just shrugs. Mika waves at the photographers to “take 5”, and walks up to Ann.

 

ANN

You worked with Risette, right? In that athletic shoot last year?

 

MIKA

Yeah? So? You wanna be an idol now?

 

ANN

What? No! I can’t sing, you know that.

 

MIKA

Yeah, or dance.

 

HARU

(Cheering from afar)

I’m sure you can dance Ann!

 

ANN

Thanks Haru! Not the point though!

 

MIKA

Then what is it?

 

ANN

You owe me, right? For stepping aside when you clearly cheated?

 

Mika winces slightly.

 

MIKA

So what?

 

ANN

Can you get me four tickets to Risette’s show tonight?

 

Mika looks befuddled by the request.

 

MIKA

Risette doesn’t give out passes to anybody. I’ve heard she has a permanent guest list, with only six names on it. They get passes to any show they want, but no one else gets freebies. And even if I could, there’s no way I would give that up to you, no matter what I owe you.

 

Mika walks back to the photoshoot. Ann walks back towards Futaba and Haru.

 

HARU

Another option gone.

 

ANN

I wonder who those six people are?

 

FUTABA

I’m sure I can find out!

 

INT. POLICE STATION ENTRANCE. LATER.

 

“New Days” is playing. Makoto returns to where she came in, the waiting area, and sees a magazine. She grabs it.

 

INT. POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION. MOMENTS LATER.

 

Makoto, pretending to read the magazine, walks down the pathway to the Interrogation rooms. She eventually finds Naoto’s room. Naoto is sitting across from MIKIO HANDA, mid 30s, ragged. Naoto looks stressed.

 

NAOTO

...agree to meet with me if you were not planning on answering my questions?

 

MIKIO

Because I wanted to see what you had. And as usual, it’s nothing.

 

NAOTO

We’ve brought you in on five separate accounts related to this robbery spree-

 

MIKIO

And you can’t connect me to any of them, can you?

 

NAOTO

I-

 

Mikio just laughs, he’s enjoying this.

 

MIKIO

In a few hours, you’ll have to let me off this carousel and I’ll be on my merry way. Just as always.

 

NAOTO

If we can look back on the night of September 3rd-

 

Miko isn’t paying attention. Naoto storms out in anger. Makoto doesn’t have time to hide, and they bump into each other.

 

NAOTO

(exasperated)

Niijima-san!

 

INT. LEBLANC. SAME TIME.

 

Sojiro is still behind the counter, still with no guests.

 

SOJIRO

No luck?

 

ANN

Mika was a bust, but we may be onto something!

 

SOJIRO

And what’s that?

 

HARU

Risette has six friends she holds in high regard, enough to give them permanent passes!

 

SOJIRO

Sounds like you guys… minus the cat, I guess.

 

FUTABA

And I think I found the list!

 

ANN

For real?

 

HARU
How?

 

FUTABA

Message boards have been obsessed with this for a while. Apparently every one of her concerts has a box that, most of the time, is completely empty. But every once in a while, it has people in it. All of the guests have been photographed by curious fans and identified.

 

ANN

Who are they?

 

Futaba looks confused.

 

HARU

What is it?

 

FUTABA

Most of them live in Inaba?

 

SOJIRO

That boonies town up north?

 

FUTABA

Yeah… one runs an inn, one owns a textile shop, another co-manages the local Junes there, and one is in the local police academy. All in Inaba.

 

ANN

So those four aren’t happening.

 

HARU

But there are still two more, correct?

 

FUTABA

Yes! One I can’t get an ID on, but… oh my gosh!

 

SOJIRO

What is it?

 

Sojiro is a little too excited, he’s invested.

 

FUTABA

The last one… it’s the Detective Prince!

 

ANN, HARU

Goro Akechi?!?

 

ANN

How does he know Risette?

 

HARU

I must admit, I cannot picture them together.

 

FUTABA

No! No, the first one. Naoto Shirogane.

 

ANN, HARU

Ooohhh…

 

ANN

Wait, how does that help us?

 

HARU

You said Makoto was at the police station, did you not? Doesn’t the Detective Prince work in Tokyo?

 

FUTABA

Exactly! All we gotta do is say we’re meeting Makoto, then find Shirogane and see if she’ll help us.

 

ANN

I don’t know how this’ll work…

 

FUTABA

Do you have a better plan?

 

ANN

No…

 

FUTABA

Alright! Let’s do this.

 

The three leave Leblanc in a hurry. Sojiro looks concerned but he can’t say anything.

 

INT. POLICE STATION - NAOTO’S DESK. SAME TIME.

 

Makoto is sitting down in her earlier seat. Naoto is looking at her, angry.

 

NAOTO

-disobeyed a direct order, and went into a restricted area!

 

MAKOTO

I’m… sorry. I just… wanted to see what a real police job was like.

 

NAOTO

Well, I guess I very much was like this at your age.

 

MAKOTO

(to herself)

Well you won’t tell me about Inaba, so how would I know?

 

NAOTO

Did you say something, Niijima-san?

 

MAKOTO

It’s nothing.

 

Naoto takes a seat at her desk.

 

NAOTO

Do you truly need to know about my current case?

 

MAKOTO

Yes.

 

NAOTO

Okay… that’s Mikio Handa. He seemed like a normal common criminal but we have been unable to pin him down for any of his many thefts. Usually banks, but he’s also often broken into homes. He doesn’t care if anyone is home… he will harm them regardless. The worst part is the joy he takes in getting out of police custody. Like it’s all a game to him.

 

MAKOTO

Would you say… he has a distorted view of the precinct?

 

NAOTO

How so?

 

MAKOTO

Like… how does he treat this place?

 

NAOTO

Like it’s… Destinyland or something. An amusement park. Like it's all a game.

 

The wheels are turning in Makoto's head.

 

MAKOTO

Interesting.

 

NAOTO

It… it is?

 

MAKOTO

Uh… yes.

 

NAOTO

Well, whatever you mean by that, I can’t keep you around with the Handa investigation ongoing. Unfortunately I think-

 

There's a loud bang as the precinct doors swing open. Haru, Futaba, and Ann hurry in.

 

ANN

Makoto? Makoto Niijima?

 

Naoto looks even more annoyed with Makoto, who goes beet red with all this.

 

MAKOTO

I'm so sorry…

 

Makoto runs over to those three, and grabs them to the side.

 

ANN

Are you shadowing the Detective Prince?

 

Ann screams with excitement

 

ANN

This couldn't be more perfect!

 

MAKOTO

Quiet down Ann! I think there's a Palace user in here.

 

Ann gets quiet at this news.

 

HARU

Who is it?

 

MAKOTO

One of the men in custody. He has to be released in a few hours, but he is a reckless thief that they cannot pin down. He tortures innocent people for his own humor. And Shirogane-sensei said that he treats this place "like an amusement park".

 

ANN

Do you want to steal his heart?

 

MAKOTO

I really, really do. This man sounds horrible, and Shirogane-sensei really needs this.

 

HARU

Let's do this!

 

FUTABA

But… we'll need to wait for the guys.

 

MAKOTO

But he's released soon… we don't have the time.

 

ANN

Just the girls then! All right.

 

HARU

How will we send a calling card, with so little time?

 

They all pause.

 

ANN

We… send it before we go in.

 

MAKOTO

That's suicide! He'll be on high alert the entire time!

 

ANN

Do you have a better option?

 

FUTABA

No…

 

MAKOTO

All right... We have to all be in agreement. So, are we stealing his heart?

 

ANN

Of course! I don't carry around calling cards for nothing!

 

HARU

Bad men deserve to be punished, do they not?

 

FUTABA

This'll be like speed running on critical mode: I'm up for the challenge.

 

MAKOTO

Let's do this.

 

They turn to go towards the detention block, when Naoto is standing over them.

 

NAOTO

What do you think you're doing?

 

INT. POLICE STATION - NAOTO’S DESK. MOMENTS LATER.

 

Makoto is seated, being scolded, by Naoto. Futaba, Haru, and Ann are behind her. “Borderline of Madness” is playing.

 

NAOTO

You can’t keep running away from me like this! You’re supposed to be shadowing me, yet all that’s happened is you walked away and disobeyed my orders. I am very disappointed in you, Niijima-san. What have you been up to?

 

MAKOTO

I think… I can help with Handa…

 

NAOTO

(sighing)

Niijima-san… The last thing I need is you sticking your nose further into where you don’t belong.

 

Ann starts to scoot away from Naoto, noticing that she’s focusing on Makoto. Futaba and Haru take note, and try to block Ann as she moves.

 

MAKOTO

Sae said-

 

NAOTO

Niijima-sama... says a lot of things. She isn’t very popular around here, there’s a reason for that. I respect her deeply, but I’m starting to think this whole thing was a mistake.

 

Naoto looks up.

 

NAOTO

Wasn’t there four of you?

 

Silence, Naoto exhales

 

NAOTO

High schoolers.

 

INT. INTERROGATION BLOCK. MOMENTS LATER.

 

Ann is sprinting, looking for the right room. She finds one very temporarily labeled “M. Handa” and makes sure no one is looking. She grabs a calling card from her purse. She quickly scribbles a message onto it, and slides the calling card under the door.

 

INT. HANDA’S CELL. SAME TIME.

 

Mikio is able to get up and look at the calling card. He reads it aloud.

 

MIKIO

“Mikio Handa: We know who you are.Your lust for bloodshed and money has poisoned the world. You treat the police station like your personal amusement park, seeing the world as a playground for you to torture and steal from others. We will steal for ourselves what matters most to you. The Phantom Thieves of Heart”. Huh. This should be fun. Always wondered if they were real.

 

INT. INTERROGATION HALLWAY. SAME TIME.

 

Naoto catches up to Ann, with Makoto, Futaba, and Haru just behind her.

 

NAOTO

Friends of Niijima-san, please, this is off-limits to civilians, just come with me-

 

ANN

Activate it, one of you guys, now.

 

FUTABA

But the Detective Prince!-

 

ANN

One thing at a time. Say the words.

 

Makoto takes a deep breath.

 

MAKOTO

Mikio Handa. Police Station. Amusement Park.

 

NAOTO

What is-

 

NAV VOICE

Match found.

 

Just then, swirling red circles engulf them, bringing them into Mikio’s heart.

 

END OF ACT 1