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Part 34 of one-shots , Part 73 of Disney One-shots , Part 2 of Sofia's one-shots
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2021-01-09
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Nurse Sofia

Summary:

A request story that one of the reviewers of my previous Sofia the First requested. Cedric sick, and Sofia and Callista are there to nurse him back to health! Enjoy!

Notes:

AI of Sofia.

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

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pixai-Sofia the First

 

 

The periwinkle heavens were bright and clear as the golden sunshine rained down upon the kingdom of Enchancia. It was such a beautiful day that everyone was outside enjoying it.

Well, almost everyone. Currently, Cedric is lying up in bed with the sorcerer flu. A wizardly sickness that only affects those who practice magic. Ordinarily, young children get it. It's sporadic for an adult to catch it. Cedric felt his bad luck curse him once more. At least there was a bright side to being indisposed. There was a knock on the door, and he said to enter.

Sofia and Callista came inside the workshop. Both dressed up as nurses. "Hello, Mr. Cedric. How are you feeling today?" Sofia asked as she carried a tray with her. "I'm feeling much better, thanks to you. You really shouldn't be fussing over me like this."

"Uncle Ceddy! You're more then worth us fussing over you!" his little niece said as she waved her wand to make a thermometer appear. "Now, let's take your temperature, Uncle Ceddy!" She promptly shoved the thermometer in his mouth and tried to take his pulse. Callista didn't know how to feel a pulse or what high temperature was. She just wanted to help out her uncle and make him feel better.

Seeing his little niece and best friend care for him was good medicine in and of itself. Sofia finished washing his forehead with a wet cloth. "So, would you like lunch now? Plus, we'll change your bedding while you eat," the princess proposed.

"That be wonderful, Sofia. Thank you."

"Okay, I hope you savor this soup. It's what my mom makes every time I feel sick. I hope I did it right. As it's my first time making it by myself," she admitted as she set the tray with the steamy bowl on his lap.

"Also, try this! I made it myself!" Callista exclaimed, giving her uncle a cup with a putrid-smelling liquid inside. Cedric decided not to ask his niece what she had whipped up—seeing how ignorance is bliss sometimes. He enjoyed Sofia's soup more than forcing himself to chug down his niece's potion. Though it tasted terrible, he did feel a lot better after he drank it.

After changing his bedding, the girls read him stories until he fell asleep. Then, smiling, the girls cleaned up the workshop and got more medicine ready when he woke up at dinner. Three days later, after all the TLC he got, Cedric was up and about. He thanked both Sofia and Callista for being such beautiful nurses to him. All smiled happily to be able to seize the day!

Notes:

This story has a warm and caring tone, effectively portraying Sofia and Callista's kindness towards Cedric. Here are some feedback points to consider:

Setting Description: The opening sentence paints a vivid picture of the kingdom of Enchancia under the bright sunshine. Consider adding sensory details throughout the story to immerse the reader in the magical setting.

Character Interaction: Cedric, Sofia, and Callista's interactions feel genuine and heartwarming. Their care for Cedric shines through, and it's clear that they have a strong bond. Adding more dialogue or small gestures between the characters could deepen their connection even further.

Conflict Resolution: While the story revolves around Cedric being sick and receiving care from Sofia and Callista, there isn't much of a conflict to resolve. Adding a small obstacle or challenge for the characters to overcome could add depth to the narrative and create a more engaging plot.

Showcasing Magic: Since the story is in a magical kingdom and revolves around a sorcerer's sickness, consider incorporating more magical elements into the narrative. This could include unique spells or enchanted objects that the characters interact with, adding to the enchantment of the story.

Pacing: The story's pacing is steady, with a clear progression of events over the three days. However, be mindful of transitions between scenes to ensure a smooth flow from one moment to the next.

Conclusion: The ending brings a sense of closure as Cedric recovers and expresses his gratitude to Sofia and Callista. Consider adding a final reflection or moment of connection between the characters to round off the story and leave a lasting impression on the reader.

This story captures the essence of kindness and friendship in a magical setting. With some additional attention to detail and development, it has the potential to become an even more heartwarming tale. Keep up the good work!