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After having his heart brutally broken by Stan, Kyle’s life takes an unexpected turn when his parents enroll him in an all-male boarding school deep in the British countryside. Thrown into this new environment he will make many enemies and allies, and will learn that there’s more to his mysterious and callous roommate than first meets the eye. British school AU, contains language and sexual content. Mostly KYMAN. R&R
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Half way through chapter 24.
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Just a heads up, I really don't hold back in this bookmark. I'm kinda mean and maybe to critical but these are my honest thoughts
"The rain falls in drenching sheets, the torrent thrumming harshly against the sodden country roads. The crystalline droplets trace a melancholy trail across the slightly tinted glass, seemingly a reflection of the inner turmoil of Kyle Broflovski." This is satire, right? I feel like the writer was trying to hard to sound all complicated but honestly good writing doesn't need a thesaurus
lol I love this shit "dregs of moisture" like tf you think your audience is? This is SP fanfiction, man
(Mini Rant that get's hella off topic and doesn't relate to this fic as much and I'm sorry) I could never see Shelia being homophobic towards her children. Like I can see where the idea comes from but Sheila loves her kids. It's shown in the show that she stands up for them, even if it's not in the best way. She does what she thinks is best for her children. I really don't think she'd be homophobic. The opposite actually. If Kyle came out to her, she'd kick in overdrive to try to make the world the best place for her son, as she's always done. Like I can picture Sheila at like an equal marriage rally with a 'Love is Love' Tshirt. It kinda irks me when she's written as a bad mom, because she really isn't. Sharon is always written as such a caring mom but I think Shelia and Gerald are just caring as Sharon. Well, maybe not AS caring but they're close. Seriously though, Fuck Randy as a parental figure.
I dunno, the author's entire writing style reminds me of FF.net, right down to how they responds to reviewers... Am I being too critical? It just, the boarding school concept is one of my favorites and I have really high expectations for it. I feel like she's putting so much effort into having the story sound so, proper and smart(?) that it takes away from the plot. A story can be written with everyday words and still be amazing. It's almost hard for me to focus on reading this because, frankly, I dont care about the unnecessary details that are painted out with ludacris words. And it's not that my comprehension level isn't up to par with this story, because I understand it all just fine. It just doesn't hold my attention.
I love Kyle's introduction. Like he gives more detail than really anyone would have cared about, like way more. Oh my god, he practically tells everyone every detail about himself. I can't tell if this was a poor writing choice or if they're trying to make their chapter longer with filler. Also, wouldn't taking horse laxatives kill you? Just seemed like a cheap jokeOh I'm sorry, I was unaware Math was a high school course you could take at a fucking academy. I don't know, that lack of trying just pisses me off. Like you couldn't even say geometry or some shit? I'm pretty sure google would of told you at least one high school math you could've said instead of just fucking MATH. Also, why wouldn't Kyle help Cartman? This is highschool. We all gotta stick together.
I honestly can not stand how much the Author changed settings in chapter 7. LIke it was bad enough when they couldn't choose which POV she wanted. ~ Can we just stop and talk about how amazing the cartman singing scene could have been? For me if feels like it was ruined by they're over complicated words. Kyle's personality could of come through so well but it just didn't. "beguiling" goddamn, just stop~WE STILL HAVE 20 MORE FUCKING CHAPTERS~ trying to conserve character space
I'm so not looking forward to reading the smut for this. LIke holy shit. HERE WE GO
Okay I actually really loved how sweet the little snip of Cartman caressing Kyle when he thought he thought he was asleep <3 OKay, you got me. This is better than I expected. It holds my attention and has a lot more actual material to it. I'm not criticizing here, but Cartman really didn't see Kyle watching him do this wth?? "complement" they used the wrong one... OH MY GOD YES THATS
PERFECT ~ENDING OF 8 PURRRRFECT
Butters's is so fucking gay
It's actually getting a lot better. Atleast we've committed to homophobic Sheila.
I really do love Cartman drinking in a Kyman fic. But only in Kyman. He usually gets this protective kinda side and it's really nice.
I'll admit it. ThIs fic got so much better. LIke wow. I'm insanely impressed.Stan and Kyle's previous relationship is really nice for the story. Mini unrelated rant time though. One thing people don't understand is then when you get out of an abusive relationship, a lot of the time it doesn't matter who the person is after them. It's not like they're going to mean to hurt you and honestly the things they do that upset you actually shouldn't. It's hard to date because you know that you'll make them feel bad for doing normal things that you're just too broken to handle.