Pokémon Legends Arceus: Dimension Collapse

After three weeks of Dawn's disappearance, Barry learns that one of the subway masters has a verrrry similar case to his friend. He decides to go to Unova to 'apply' for the temporary position of a subway master, only to spill some info to team up with the other subway master in locating their pals.

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Chapter 1: Chapter I: Pages 1-5

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Barry meets with Ingo (pt1) Barry meets with Emmet (pt2) Barry meets with Emmet (pt3) Barry, Emmet, pt4 Title of fancomic

Chapter 2: Chapter I: Pages 6-10

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Chapter 3: Chapter I: Pages 11 & 12

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Barry/Emmet talk pt 1 Barry & Emmet talk pt 2

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Sorry for the shorter chapter! I'll make a longer one the next one :(

Chapter 4: Chapter I: Pages 13-16

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Emmet chatting with Barry part 1 Emmet Talking with Barry part 2 I think we know where this is going Joltik, just kidding, It's Barry who wants to fine someone.

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Eyyyy looks like we're gonna be heading to Hisui in no time! :D

Chapter 5: Chapter I: Pages 17-20

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Barry in Eterna Forest Pt 1 Oop, Emmet's there too, and he just beat a kid That kid's offering money now, but Emmet doesn't want it ig Barry guessed that he 'misjudged' him, HES WRONG.

Chapter 6: Chapter I: Pages 21-23

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Barry tries to fine Emmet. But then realizes that's a bad idea . . . So Emmet shows him macaroons, even though it's supposed to be bribing someone else.

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Any guess on what Emmet's going to try? :D

Chapter 7: Chapter I: Pages 24-27

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Chapter 8: Chapter I: Pages 28-31

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Chapter 9: Chapter I: Pages 32-35 (Finale of Ch I)

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Emmet and Barry finally go to the Past

Chapter 10: Chapter II: Pages 1-4

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Sorry to leave you all hanging still on what happened to Barry and Emmet! It'll happen the next update, I promise. :)
Oh, btw, I tried a different style for this one (tried one more similar to Masters EX), so let me know which one you guys like better in the comments! :D

Chapter 11: Chapter II: Pages 5-8

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Oh no! They're without their pokémon, in a new land? I don't know who else could've possibly been through that! (Stares at Ingo and Dawn)

Chapter 12: Chapter II: Pages 9-12

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Hear my head canon out, Emmet and Ingo wear hats to bed if they're with teens/kids to avoid the 'BALD!' calling like birds :)

Chapter 13: Chapter II: Pages 13-16

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Whew! Good thing that thing's only lv.16!

Chapter 14: Chapter II: Pages 17-20

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Chapter 15: Chapter II: Pages 21-24

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If it isn't our lovely little merchant! And what a great guide he is, sending those two to the mountains away from the rest of civilization! :D

Chapter 16: Chapter II: Pages 25-28

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Another one to the party I guess? :'D

Chapter 17: Chapter II: Pages 29-32 (Finale of II)

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Liza electrocutes Emmet

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Just wanted to let everyone know on here that I'll actually have a holiday-side special for this fan comic starting the 11th. However, it will be in a separate fic (or on Tumblr as well) than this one due to it not really being apart of the plot.

Chapter 18: Chapter III: Part 1

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Palmer realized he failed as a father.

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Hi guys! I would've posted the holiday arc on here, but since it wasn't a main part of the plot, I decided to put it on Tumblr (you can see the holiday arc here) instead. I'll probably put some other fan fictional side stories of the main comic on here though!

Chapter 19: Chapter III: Part 2

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Chapter 20: Chapter III: Part 3

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Chapter 21: Chapter III: Part 4

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Who's that Pokémon? (Shows a shadow of a Scyther)
It's Joltik! (Global chaos ensues like the Jigglypuff overheadview)

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I'll probably update this with a couple pages each update(3-7 roughly each time). I also have these pages available on Tumblr as well (gamerbeta is my username).

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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 9 Fri 25 Oct 2024 07:18PM UTC

Celebi looks concerned, which makes ME concerned!
I hope that Emmet and Barry don't end up in a COMPLETELY wrong place, like where you find Ultra Beasts or something...

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 9 Mon 04 Nov 2024 12:19AM UTC
  
  True! That would really suck for both of them! (It would be a shame if they ended up in Necrozma's hideout) . . .
  
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Misteresque on Chapter 9 Fri 25 Oct 2024 08:58PM UTC

And then they both got send to legends ZA without their memories.

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 9 Mon 04 Nov 2024 12:20AM UTC
  
  Honestly, I can totally see Pokémon pulling a stunt like that lmao XD
  
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RileySFS on Chapter 9 Sat 26 Oct 2024 02:31AM UTC

Beautiful! Keep up the fantastic work!

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 9 Mon 04 Nov 2024 12:20AM UTC
  
  Ty! :DDD
  
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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 10 Mon 04 Nov 2024 12:39AM UTC

It seems that Dawn currently has her memories, which I think will be helpful!
I imagine this question will be answered soon, but I wonder if Ingo is a mentor to Dawn or if she has adopted him as her uncle.
If it's the second option, I wonder how Barry and Emmet will feel about suddenly having a niece (in Emmet's case) or having TWO MORE Battle Facility Leaders as mentors (in Barry's case, because his Dad is already a Battle Facility Leader)

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 10 Mon 04 Nov 2024 01:01AM UTC
  
  Yeah! I think that would definitely help clear things out later on!
  As for your question about Ingo's relation with Dawn, that might not be answered for a bit (I won't say why, but that will be revealed the next episode :), so you can choose which way she sees him!
  But I will say that there may be something involving battle facility leaders later though . . . (Hopefully Barry knows that he's travelling with one, he did read the application after all, or his father did tell him, right??)
  
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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 10 Mon 04 Nov 2024 02:33AM UTC

Dawn looks so weird here... or maybe it's the stretching of the image.
Still, I like the fact she has a Hisuian Samurott. Those are quite badass indeed.
I'll wait patiently to see where did Barry and Emmet land.

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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 11 Thu 07 Nov 2024 06:06PM UTC

Oooooh snap... They went without Pokémon, and that means, without protection (and Jolt can't protect for shit xD. Unless against regular Unovan Zoroark, probably...)
I hope they get used to this stuff... Or make new friends soon.

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 11 Fri 08 Nov 2024 01:11AM UTC
  
  Yep, in the middle of the wild, clinging onto dear life, and their only source? A joltik who focused too much on pranks and not enough training XD
  
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Raziel_SoulReaver on Chapter 11 Thu 07 Nov 2024 06:31PM UTC

Poor Joltik :(
Such disrespect

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 11 Fri 08 Nov 2024 01:13AM UTC
  
  Lil' guy didn't need that blow to his self esteem, not cool Emmet! Ingo would be disappointed! >:(
  
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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 11 Thu 07 Nov 2024 07:06PM UTC

Infernape DEFINITELY suits Barry (the ONLY thing I can picture is the funny little stomping dance he does at the start of a battle in Gen 4), but does that mean that Dawn’s starter was Turtwig? In Gen 4, Barry chooses the starter that’s strong against you (I’m not sure if that’s what happens in the Diamond and Pearl remakes)

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 11 Fri 08 Nov 2024 01:17AM UTC
  
  Right! That's true . . . I guess I can say it on here since it's not a spoiler to the comic itself (I'll have Dawn mention it later on), but even though she's the 'protagonist' in Legends Arceus in this case, that doesn't mean she was in her hometown (there's a smol reason why Lucas had the Palkia :)
  
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YumeYoruPPR on Chapter 11 Thu 07 Nov 2024 10:23PM UTC

The disrespect to agent Jolt. He tries his best Emmet. 🥺

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 11 Fri 08 Nov 2024 01:18AM UTC
  
  He does (even if he commits a couple crimes while doing so)! Agent Jolt should go against him and revolt! >:(
  
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2. 1. YumeYoruPPR on Chapter 11 Fri 08 Nov 2024 05:05AM UTC
    
    He should repeat what he did to get out of the time out Emmet gave him for shorting Emmet's Xtrans out
    
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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 12 Sat 09 Nov 2024 04:06PM UTC

This was... Surprisingly heartwarming.
I hope Emmet manages to find Palmer once again once this little (big) detour is dealt with.
15 tries to make a fire without their 'mon!? Damn xD
I sure hope their arms aren't too tired...
And I want to see Emmet (and Ingo's) hairstyle to see how ridiculous they are. But I'm willing to guess they're either balding or full bald.
See ya.

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 12 Sat 09 Nov 2024 08:39PM UTC
  
  I mean, all it would take is a flamethrower normally, so I wouldn't be surprised if hardly any trainer in the Pokémon world would know how to start one XD
  And as for the hairstyling, I don't think Emmet would like it if Barry saw and went something like "You should get a fine for that haircut! Or are you balding? :O"
  
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2. 1. Wolftelope90 on Chapter 12 Sat 09 Nov 2024 11:47PM UTC
    
    Thanks for answering my question in such a creative and funny way. LOL. xD
    
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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 12 Sat 09 Nov 2024 07:09PM UTC

They're in Hisui, which is good! I was worried that they were in ancient Johto (because that's where Celebi is from, so I imagine that's the region it's most familiar with when it comes to the layout and geography)
My guess is that a Scyther is fighting an Eevee. Emmet likes bug types, so I think he might be a good trainer for a Scyther. I wonder if he'll evolve it into a Kleavor. That would require catching it though, and I don't know if either Barry or Emmet have empty PokeBalls.

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 12 Sat 09 Nov 2024 08:41PM UTC
  
  You may be on point! The next part'll show if your guess is right! :D
  
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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 13 Mon 11 Nov 2024 07:04PM UTC

At first I thought that the Bibarel was Calaba's, but then I saw the red eyes. So either that's a wild Alpha, or something VERY bad has happened to Calaba's Bibarel (and possibly other Pokemon)

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 13 Tue 12 Nov 2024 12:38AM UTC
  
  I will say there is an alpha Bibarel in the obsidian fieldlands (close to the area where all the Scyther are at, so if you see the map with the alpha pokémon marked, you'll be able to find their current location! :D) That would be verrrrrry bad if that happened to Calaba's Bibarel tho :(
  
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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 13 Mon 11 Nov 2024 08:38PM UTC

I am not in the know of Legends Arceus story, so I am a bit confused...
Why Emmet is ordering Jolt to attack?

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 13 Tue 12 Nov 2024 12:35AM UTC
  
  Oh! This isn't part of the main PLA story, it's more of a side thing here (side quest maybe? Dunno what to call it), so no previous PLA experience needed for this moment.
  I think he's ordering Jolt due to the fact that this Bibarel's a bit weaker (level 16 in the wild for this alpha bibarel, Joltiks in the chargestone cave are found to be around level 20 minimum, which he might consider 'weak' due to the fact his other pokémon are all level 50s) and already lost some hp from the defending Scyther and Eevee. He also is most likely doing that in hopes that they could get more pokémon on their team in order to have a (slightly) better chance in surviving Hisui ^^
  
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2. 1. Pokemonpurson on Chapter 13 Fri 29 Nov 2024 01:19PM UTC
    
    It probably also helps that Bibarel is part Water type!
    
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3. Pokemonpurson on Chapter 13 Fri 29 Nov 2024 01:17PM UTC
  
  The Pokémon Sneasler was introduced in Legends Arceus, and if you want to hear the best reaction to her design, look up “theamandafiles Sneasler” on YouTube.
  Two of my favorite quotes are “Where is the Pokémon? Is it behind the model?” and “Now I’m in the backpack of a cheerleader and it’s like ‘I paid $60 for this game, I don’t deserve to be humiliated like this.’”
  Someone (not Amanda) made a video that’s 2 minutes and 33 seconds long that’s just Amanda talking about Sneasler, but it’s from a longer video (part 2 of Amanda’s 5 part series about Legends Arceus)
  
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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 14 Fri 15 Nov 2024 08:16PM UTC

Good thing Jolt isn't weak per se. And now those two have one extra Pokémon each. I don't know if Barry will bond with Scyther or with Eevee. Probably the latter.
BTW the panel with Eevee being applied a potion on... Feels a bit off in perspective. You could practice a bit more. Just a little nitpicking.
And Emmet seems to dislike the Professor in his region for some reason... Why is that?

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 14 Sun 24 Nov 2024 03:58PM UTC
  
  Oh! That last part was just a reference at the video game trainers catching too many pokémon, he doesn't have a hate speech on Juniper (at least I don't think . . . I may try to look into that later :)
  And at first when you mentioned the panel was off on perspective, I was really worried I accidentally had Barry spraying the potion somewhere bad! That wouldn't have been good! :O But yeah, I'm definitely not the best when it comes to perspective.
  
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YumeYoruPPR on Chapter 14 Fri 15 Nov 2024 08:59PM UTC

Jolt looks so pleased with himself XD

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 14 Sun 24 Nov 2024 03:59PM UTC
  
  He should be! Lil' guy took on someone at least 10x his size and won (that's embarrassing for the Bibarel lol) :D
  
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Zeug on Chapter 15 Sun 24 Nov 2024 04:36PM UTC

Bro blind. Can't distinguish white from black lol.

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1. Pokemonpurson on Chapter 15 Sun 24 Nov 2024 05:49PM UTC
  
  I'm guessing he thought Ingo had cleaned his coat, or finally decided his original one was too torn and gotten a new one entirely
  
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2. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 15 Sun 24 Nov 2024 06:19PM UTC
  
  He also didn't notice Emmet's got no goatee! Bro really is blind! :O
  
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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 15 Sun 24 Nov 2024 05:44PM UTC

I can't tell if Volo is trying to get them killed, or telling them where the Pearl Clan settlement is. If he gets his hands on Celebi, it will NOT end well

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 15 Sun 24 Nov 2024 06:22PM UTC
  
  Hey! You never know with him! Could be good, could be bad! But hopefully he doesn't kidnap a certain time-travelling mythical celery-like Pokémon, that'd be verrrrry bad! :)
  
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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 15 Sun 24 Nov 2024 11:57PM UTC

Holy shit!! The plot thickens...
Emmet's reactions were quite funny. And I sure hope that they're getting closer to find their targets.
"Celebi" as a ship... interesting way to deflect stuff xD.
Now, let's hope that things result well for them.

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 15 Mon 25 Nov 2024 03:25AM UTC
  
  Hopefully! That would definitely be a good thing if they get closer to Dawn and Ingo! :D
  The one issue that Emmet didn't think of when calling Celebi a 'ship' was that Volo's a merchant, and I like to believe he has a good recall on names of ships in Hisui based on trading, sooo hopefully he doesn't look into it too much . . . :)
  
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Pokemonpurson on Chapter 16 Tue 26 Nov 2024 04:40PM UTC

I'm starting to get suspicious that, somehow, siblings are being targeted by the distortions.
Dawn was sent by Arceus, so she doesn't count

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 16 Wed 27 Nov 2024 11:46PM UTC
  
  Distortions just like creating distant relationships! (and family dynamics . . . and angst)
  
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Wolftelope90 on Chapter 16 Tue 26 Nov 2024 05:54PM UTC

Hmmm... Liza looks pretty roughed up. Rough landing, huh?
Another pair of siblings is separated. Poor Tate. Must be feeling so maligned by destiny... Unless he gets to Celebi, too xD.
Now, I wonder what will happen next.
And yeah, Jolt once more running towards the excitement... I mean, danger!!
Let's hope everything turns alright for them...

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1. Gamer_Beta on Chapter 16 Wed 27 Nov 2024 11:48PM UTC
  
  Yeah, I do feel a bit bad for Tate, he might do something too...
  Jolt's definitely gotta be on a leash, he always runs into danger. XD
  
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