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Part 5 of 100 Word Drabbles , Part 8 of Encanto Drabbles
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2024-09-07
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7 September 2024 Prompt: Confess

Summary:

It took Mirabel a long time to be able to speak of these terrible thoughts, even in the place her cousin Dolores swears she ignores.

Notes:

Following Azdaema’s timing and dates from “Open Your Eyes,” making Mirabel about 19-20 here, but in an AU where Padre Flores didn’t mess up at his job like he did to kick off the action in that fic…

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

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After walking through her usual weaknesses, this time involving Presentación’s idiocy (pride), Isabela’s beauty (envy), and remaining hard feelings about that skirt Antonio’s coatis shredded (wrath), Mirabel swallowed.

“And I have had impure thoughts about…” Oh God, she still couldn’t say it, despite knowing since before she really understood what sins were that Padre Flores wouldn’t speak a word of what he heard.

“My child, whoever it was, you can be forgiven. But you must confess it.”

“I’ve had impure thoughts about my uncle.”

“Have you entertained them?”

“Aren’t you going to ask which one?”

His answering sigh was enough.

Notes:

Along with the ones we met in the movie, Mirabel has several uncles on her father’s side of the family also in the Valle del Encanto.

But there’s only one that Padre Flores has seen her hanging around with all the time since the Madrigals’ house collapsed and was rebuilt.