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ooooooo ooo ok so you read the description.. original fic by markai cat. Im sure you know him if you're reading this
Ive been fixated on this fic and the animations associated with it recently so here's my rewrite Imao. I don't support mark's actions or some stuff in this fic. I'll try to make the S/a adjacent scenes more realistic and have them seem less like fetishes because i cant lie the original sorta reads that way. This version will stay mostly true to the original (as much as possible) besides the fact i'll probably remove some of the super graphic sexual scenes. which do exist cuz ive unfortunately seen them... I might make another rewrite at a later time where i edit the story a whole lot and kinda make it my own thing but idk.
Also, I currently only have access to chapters 1,2 and 4 plus some random snippets, so those 3 will be closest to the original. I don't know how far ill go off from the original because i don't know the missing parts very well and that makes me sad soo If you're reading this and you have anything from the original fic (or any other markai fics tbh, i kinda wanna rewrite unstable lovesick too) Dm me on countryhumansanimationz on tiktok or comment under the same user on youtube or just comment here tbh ill give u my discord ok haha.
While this is a rewrite, im keeping the general plot the same so it'll still be kind of insane. I changed around a few ages and stuff but nothing big and there's only so much a rewrite can do for a fic with a story like this :sob: basically it WILL be corny but i was born on the cob