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In your memories, you see Dave Strider, fourteen-years-old and made up of lean muscle and awkward limbs that he would still need a few years to grow into fully. Crows surround him, all cawing impatiently, vying for the chicken sandwich in his backpack. He swears loudly as he swings a stick at them, trying to get them to leave him the fuck alone.
“Stupid feathery assholes,” he’d always complain once he finally shooed them away.
You tear yourself out of the memory. You miss him, and you hate yourself for it.
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The Davekat Stargazing fic
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This is the DaveKat novella STANARD. It starts of incredibly strong, playing fast and loose with time to while still getting across how the relationship developes over years and years. This fics biggest boon is it's pacing and length. It is an absolutely perfect length for its concept, it uses it very effectively and doesn't overstay its welcome, hitting a short 4 chapters and ~40k words. It's worth reading for that alone since it won't eat up time like a longfic but still provide that level or story. The main complaint here is that it does start to run out of steam as it goes, especially in the final chapter I think it just doesn't live up to the expectations of the earlier chapters. Not even sure what you would change though, but I think a much more focused cast alla 'The Fall of Rome' could have done wonders. Not that the ending is bad or anything, it still concludes the story quite well, but it feels like it loses it's unique charm and falls into a much more traditional and well worn DaveKat. This could just be my weary soul being picky about seeing the same thing, I've read over 50 of these things at this point, still very good
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awwawswwew :'))
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im never getting over this
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ohhhhh 😭😭😭😭😭😭ohhhhhhhhhhh 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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