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So it's been like 5 months. remember the sequel I was going to write? yeah, that was a flop- it wasn't very good, it had like no plot, and I never made time for it. I miss writing this verse. Like a lot. I'm very proud of it and think that, besides happy, this is the best thing I've written. So I've decided something.
Either an alternate version based on the other half of the theory that deals with like angel/demon wars or whatever, or...
A REWRITE. Not a 100% rewrite, but like a fixed up, heavily edited version with more stuff. I would like to add, remove, change, and slightly fix/alter some things.
THINGS I'D LIKE TO CHANGE:
- title. I'm not 100% happy with this title anymore and I'd like to change it on the new version as the full title is very long. Maybe just "You Never Walk Alone", or something else. Maybe you can suggest something?
- Jimin's suicide attempt part. I feel like the way I had him attempt suicide was a bit annoying and it didn't work well. Honestly, Hoseok's pills shouldn't have been there anymore and I knew that. Jimin wouldn't have been able to overdose on them because realistically they would have been taken and thrown out by the others. The only reason he was in the tub was because of the I Need U MV, which their attempts and accidents were based on. If Jimin attempted suicide in this, he more than likely would have tried to bleed himself to death since he's had an issue with cutting.
- Yoongi's attempt(?). The fire thing was a bit too cringe-worthy in my opinion. Originally, I had planned for Yoongi to actually set either his apartment or a motel room on fire after thinking that Jimin was dead, but for some reason I changed it to the studio and rushed through it?? I think it'd be better if the fire was an accident, actually.
- Some other small scenes, some dialogue, especially between Taehyung and his father, Yoongi and Jimin, etc.
- I'm thinking about changing the fact that Hoseok liked Taemin and Taemin asked him out. Reason below.
THINGS I WOULD LIKE TO ADD:
- More scenes between Taehyung and Jungkook, Taehyung and Namjoon, Yoongi and Jungkook, etc
- More scenes between Jimin and Hoseok since there's like only one and there's supposed to be more, like the theory and MVs.
- More scenes featuring Namjoon and Jungkook, respectively. There aren't a lot of them because they were harder for me to write.
- More scenes featuring the others, respectively.
- More scenes about Taehyung and Hoseok together. They didn't have many.
- More scenes between Jimin and Jungkook and perhaps a kiss and/or confession from Jungkook (jikook is my least favorite of the ships featured and I kind of ignored them when I shouldn't have. I'll suck it up for you guys).
- Bonus scenes with Jin? And Jin with Namjoon? Maybe one with Hoseok and Taemin depending on what else I decide to do?
- More backstory, especially Jin's, Hoseok's, and Namjoon's, since we know a bit about Taehyung's, Jungkook's, Jimin's and Yoongi's.
- An accident or something of the like for Namjoon possibly. He didn't get much of one– his car was just stolen and he broke down. I need the angst ??
- More scenes between Taehyung and Taeyeon.
- Perhaps some parts where the boys meet Taeyeon and perhaps Hoseok falls for her since he likes her brother and they look alike ??? (That's why I might change the Taemin thing but I'm still unsure).
- Some extra scenes to break up the accidents and attempts a bit.
- I'd like to add more scenes about Jimin not eating and collapsing as a result. (I got this idea while watching criminal minds last night lmao.)
- Other things about Jungkook and his parents probably.
- More scenes with the boys coming together (maybe sitting around a fire like in the MVs, etc), more with them drifting apart in the beginning.
- A few extra things.
THINGS I WOULD LIKE TO FIX/ALTER:
- Jimin's backstory, mostly. A bit of the others', as well.
- Jin's suicide note. I may change it back to the original one I wrote for him.
- Jimin's suicide note. It could use some editing, I think.
- The "Namjoon got his car stolen" part.
- The "Taehyung jumps off the structure" part. I'd like to expand on it some.
- Hoseok's overdose and hospital scenes. I'd like to add to them.
- Other scenes, especially ones about Jimin not eating.
- Jin's explanation.
- A few other things, mostly minor things.
As of right now, I don't have much I'd like to remove. Maybe where Yoongi writes lyrics, or where he burns his old shit. Those scenes weren't needed.
Let me know what you guys think! Is it worth redoing? Anyone wanna read it?
If I decide to, it'll be a separate work from this one.
Have any ideas? Tell me!!
that's all!