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Reflections

Summary:

After escaping the Black Pyramid and Lion-O's rebirth, the ThunderCats find a delightful hideaway and start to reflect on who they are and what is coming for them in the future.

Notes:

This is my seventh one-shot request. This is the second one for my friend Phil. Given this is initially what he wanted but chickened out at asking me for it first. This is his favorite show, and I'll do my best to give him what he wants.

I've never done a ThunderCats fanfic before. So I hope I can do him and the show proud. And I wish forever that they had finished the 2011 version of the show.

The only thing to be done is we make the ending for ourselves in our fanfics.

 

So enjoy this one.

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

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The small pride of ThunderCats had gone as far as they could from the Black Pyramid of Mumm-Ra. Finally, they'd return to the beautiful woodland. They'd discovered a pleasant glen with a pretty stream running through it.

They were sitting down for a rest after being dog-tired from the trials in the spirit world and their risky venture to Mumm-Ra's stronghold. They needed a breather.

Surrounding the glean were bushes bursting with colorful fruit. With their mouths watering, the pride quickly gathered as much as they could hold. Then, as they sat down to savor the meal, Wilykit began to play her woodwind instrument to lull everyone into a peaceful mind.

"If only we could fish," grumbled Panthro as he didn't particularly enjoy the fruit. He was a carnivore through and through.

"Be thankful, General, we found anything to eat. We almost had the last meal a few hours ago. So be thankful we are enjoying any food," Tygra chastised the war-torn Cat.

"Let's not fight again. If we unearth those Stones and thwart Mumm-Ra, we need to have a stronger bond. After all, Jaga once told me that we rise and fall together. So we need to ensure we don't fall again," Cheetara reminded everyone of their old mentor's wisdom.

"Jaga was indeed full of wisdom, and he's right in this case. The trials I just endured pushed me to my limits. But, he said he wanted me to take what I learned and be a better leader.

So it's time we all bettered ourselves if we are going to save Third Earth," Lion-o said as he turned his sword over and over in his hands.

They'd come close to losing the Sword of Omens and the power stone inside it. All because of his foolishness. If he was ever going to be a proper king, he needed to learn from his mistakes.

Dusk had fallen by now, so they made a small campfire. The flames cast a magic spell over the group as they curled around the fire. Each Cat started to think back on its memories as it sparked and crackled.

The Wily twins slowly thought back to their home and family. How carefree and straightforward life had been in those days. Before, their reality had been changed so harshly.

The twins may be only kittens, but their lives on the streets of Thundara truly changed them. Their eyes had been opened to the harsh reality of life. While the other Cats had lived in the upper class, they'd seen the slums, poverty, and unforgiving side.

But did that make them stronger? Was suffering the underbelly of the fallen kingdom proof they're stronger? Or was it their determination and drive to survive that made them more reliable?

Could they take all they learned and become genuinely worthy of the ThunderCats? That was the question that lingered in their minds.

Panthro wondered about his ex-friend Gruel and what had changed him so much. Why had he sided with Mumm-Ra? Why the betrayal? Would his other old friends betray his trust again? How could he trust anyone again?

Cheetara thought how messy the love triangle had been between herself, Lion-O and Tygra. Maybe if she had been more honest and straightforward from the beginning, things wouldn't have been so messy later.

Tygra thought he had a chance to be king, and now he could see how hard it was. And finding out what his little brother had gone through. Hell and back again to return to them? Would he have been able to sacrifice his soul? Would he ever be able to make that kind of choice? Was he fit to be a leader? Was he even a good brother?

Lion-O's thoughts were over everything he learned about himself and his friends in the spirit world. He was more determined then ever to prove himself. He would avenge his fallen father, and one way or another, he'd bring peace to the world Mumm-Ra had thrown into chaos.

There were many unforeseen challenges ahead. Trials they all would face that would test their hearts and souls. Would they be loyal, brave, and trustworthy? Would they see who they were on the inside when they looked in the mirror? Would this war ever end? Would Third Earth ever be at peace and all life living in harmony? Those questions and answers would be the next step in their journey.

One thing would always be accurate, though. Together they're more muscular, and their forged bonds couldn't be broken. So as long as their family stayed together and were true, then there was nothing they couldn't do!

Notes:

Your story captures the essence of camaraderie and introspection within the ThunderCats team, which is great! Here are some feedback points to consider:

Character Development: You delve into the thoughts and reflections of each character, which adds depth to the narrative. However, try to ensure that each character's voice and perspective are distinct. This will help readers connect with them deeper and understand their struggles and motivations more clearly.

Dialogue: The dialogue effectively conveys the relationships and dynamics among the ThunderCats. It would be beneficial to vary the dialogue tags and sentence structures to avoid repetition and keep the exchanges engaging.

Pacing: The story's pacing is generally good, but there are moments when the narrative could benefit from a tighter focus. Consider trimming some descriptions or internal monologues to maintain momentum and keep the reader's attention.

Conflict and Resolution: While the characters reflect on their past experiences and personal growth, consider introducing external conflicts or challenges that they must face in the present moment. This can add tension and drive the plot forward, providing opportunities for further character development and teamwork.

Theme and Symbolism: You touch upon themes of redemption, loyalty, and self-discovery, central to the ThunderCats mythology. Consider incorporating symbolic elements or recurring motifs that reinforce these themes throughout the story, adding depth and resonance to the narrative.

Overall, you've created a compelling glimpse into the inner workings of the ThunderCats team, showcasing their strengths, vulnerabilities, and unwavering bond. With some fine-tuning, your story has the potential to resonate even more deeply with readers. Keep up the great work!