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Chapter 5: An Inversion of Forms and Revelations

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Message chat: Kyouka

Today 3:24 PM

Kyouka

Thanks for your support today Momo

Momo

Of course! I’m proud of you.

Kyouka

I’m glad everyone in our class was supportive

Not that I thought any of them would be really homophobic or whatever

But I was still nervous

Momo

Completely understandable.

You were brave to share your truth. Not everyone has the courage to admit that to their whole class.

Some people are too scared to even admit it to the people closest to them.

Kyouka

Thank you, it’s thanks to you accepting me that I found the courage

Momo

I’ll accept anything from you.

Kyouka

Huh?

Momo

I mean if you want to share anything else with me.

If you happen to have any other secrets you’ve been holding back.

I would accept them gladly.

Kyouka

Thanks Momo, I appreciate your support, but I’m good.


Message chat: Study Group!

Today 4:43 PM

Mina

So like, is it too soon to ask if you have a crush on any of the girls in our class, Kyouka?

Kyouka

Omfg

Mina

Just saying

I feel like that’s the sort of thing you realize

Bc you have a crush on a specific girl??

Momo

Kyouka, you don’t have to answer her if you don’t want to.

Mina

I’m just curious!

Kyouka

You’re nosy, is what you are

Mina

Idk, its just like

Is that the sort of thing u know about ur whole life?

Or did u used to think u were straight?

Kyouka

I guess it was kind of a slow realization…?

Mina

Right, of course

But like

Was there ever maybe a time where u tipped over to thinking that maybe u like, like girls more than the normal amount?

Momo

Would you care to share what the “normal amount” of liking women is, Mina?

Mina

U know, normal

Cause like if u ACTUALLY like women thats the sort of thing u would notice probably before ur final year of high school right?

Momo

You can discover new things about yourself anytime, Mina 🙂.

Mina

Lol not asking for myself or whatever Im just curious 🤣

Ur so silly Momo

Kyouka

I mean, sure I guess I wasn’t certain whether I was REALLY gay

There are some riot grrrl rock stars that are VERY hot whose posters I used to stare at dreamily

But I guess the reality didn’t really process for me until puberty

Mina

So what changed in puberty?

Kyouka

I really wanted a girl to kiss me 😭

I mean, any girl

Not saying Iwas thinking of anyparticular girl or anything

Just in general I wanted a girl to kiss me

Mina

Ooooh okay

Kyouka

You get it??

Mina

Yeah, like wanting to get kissed by a girl does sound pretty gay

Kyouka

Ahaha yeah

Mina

But that’s like

The gay part is WANTING a gal to do that TO you, right?

Momo

As opposed to…?

Mina

Like ur getting turned on by a girl doing stuff to you

You cant really ignore that its a woman making u feel that way

But like imagine

For the girl whos DOING the stuff

She could just be chilling, for all we know

Bc she could JUST be doing, not necessarily reacting to a woman

So that doesn’t have to be gay

Does it?

Kyouka

No yeah that makes sense

Momo

Hmm, do you truly think so?

Mina

I think Kyoukas the expert here

Kyouka

Yeah don’t worry I wouldn’t assume a woman is gay just bc she touches another woman

Mina

Okay that makes sense!

Momo

Hmm.



TeaLover8000000

I’m really enjoying this story, the language is beautiful and the world is a rich tapestry, but I cannot help but hope that Kyoji will at some point return Yao’s affections. As a reader, we are privy to Kyoji’s point of view and understand their love is mutual, but I fret at the thought of what the story must be from Yao’s perspective: She’s continuously initiated interactions with her and received nothing in return. The story (and their romance) seems like it could be enriched if Kyoji would deign to show her a smidgen of initiative as well, and set Knight Yao at ease.


TeaLover8000000

This story is such fun, I laughed many times while reading it, but there’s a certain aspect that I wish we saw more of. Throughout the story, Amina is the one who drives their interactions, usually with some excuse of it being “just for fun” or otherwise. Though it allows for some great interactions, ultimately I cannot help but see Amina as someone trying to avoid genuine vulnerability. If this is truly meant to be a romance story, I would be curious to see Amina let go a bit and allow Momoko to return some of that affection. Unless that occurs, I fear Amina will just keep playing with Momoko and genuine romance will struggle to develop, as much as the characters seem to want it.


Message chat: Kyouka

Today 8:43 PM

Kyouka

Hey Momo, would it be alright if I came over?

I’ve been thinking about my story and the overall romantic development, and I think it might be good to attempt something different

I don’t want to pressure you though

It’s fine if you don’t want to do this, but I think it might be kinda helpful to maybe switch things up a little bit?

Momo

Just come over, Kyouka.

Message chat: Mina

Today 8:51 PM

Mina

Heyyyyy

Can I ask another favor?

Pretty please?

It’s something a LITTLE diff from what we’ve been doing…

But it might be fun!!

Maybe, idk how you’ll feel about it

But

Lol this is so awkward to text

Look, I’m just gonna stop by. No way ur already asleep, right?


Message chat: Study Group!

Today 8:58 PM

Mina

I’m SO sorry I interrupted you guys, I didn’t realize u were like that!!!

Kyouka

We’re not!!!

Mina

???????

Kyouka

I know what it looked like

But

We’re not like dating or anything

Please don’t tell anyone about this

Mina

Um ok

Kyouka

Momo was just helping me out with something

There are weird circumstances

PRIVATE circumstances

Mina

Ok!!! Sorry again

Momo

It’s alright, Mina, but maybe remember the value of knocking 🙂.


Message chat: Mina

Today 9:09 PM

Momo

Sorry I missed these texts. As you saw earlier, I was occupied.

You can come over now though.

Mina

????????

I know this is all just for my story

But it feels kinda skeezy to do if ur dating Kyouka

Which u guys coulda told me, btw

The three of us hang out enough that I feel like it should have come up

Momo

We’re not dating.

Mina

I know Kyouka was acting shy in the groupchat, but… I can read between the lines

Momo

If kissing was enough to be dating someone, we would be dating 🙂.

Mina

LOL

Ok

Point taken

Momo

You saw the groupchat, and that Kyouka agrees that we’re not dating. So you can come over

Mina

U sure?

Momo

Mina.

Come over.


The Blade’s Arpeggio

By JumpingJack

Fantasy  LGBTQ+  Adventure  Romance

Words: 33,684  Chapters: 13/?  Likes: 551  Hits: 10,954

Summary of Chapter 13

In between adventures, Kyoji reflects and realizes there’s something she must do before she and Yao can move forward.

...

Wyrm-Whisperer

Holy shit, it finally happened… Kyoji kissed her. No potions, no excuses, nothing but a real sincere kiss and most importantly: A confession. Author, this was so sweet and warm to read, I’m so glad to see these two can now move forward with their romance on open terms, amazing what a simple bit of communication can do.

JumpingJack

I wish real life was that simple…


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Amina’s Amazing Adventure

By AlienXRipley

Fantasy  Romance  Adventure  LGBTQ+

Words: 21,432  Chapters: 17/?  Likes: 564  Hits: 12,285

Summary of Chapter 17

While Amina and Yao are trapped in the mysterious wonderland beneath the duck-turtle lake, Amina has a revelation.

...

GUNDUMMY

WAHOO AMINA HAS REALIZED HER FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but also real talk??? I love looking up this story every time it updates bc its always so silly and funny but tbh the romance scene here rlly got to me….. idk the other romance scenes were hot but they felt so fun and games but here its amina whos laid bare and has no choice but to admit to herself she wants this….. as a certified silly girl myself i know how hard it is to admit that sort of srs thing and so it hit me really hard somehow

IceWall

My Skin Is Clear My Crops Are Flourishing My Vision Has Been Corrected I’m Hydrated And Well Nourished The Sun Is Shining, And My Beautiful Baby Amina Has Finally Let Momoko In

JupiterOutRise

I’m shocked but very pleased to see they’ve had a bit of a dynamic flip. It seems like Amina was always in control prior to this, and always defining their interactions, but now we’re getting to see her off-balance from a single kiss from Momoko? The contrast is delicious, and honestly the descriptions of the yearning and desperation from Momoko feel really emotionally resonant. Even though they haven’t officially gotten together, the desire is so powerfully written it’s palpable.


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Message chat: Study Group!

Today 7:24 PM

Momo

Can you guys come over?


Forums > Story Discussions > Top Stories Of The Week

Top Stories of This Week

Voltpad_Official

Hello readers, welcome back to another electrifying work of celebrating fiction published right here on Voltpad! Today, we will be highlighting five stories that have been enjoying increased attention recently. Congratulations to the authors and fans for these works doing so well this week!

  1. Kisses In The Darkness by NoVemBerBAE Romance Drama
  2. Amina’s Amazing Adventure by AlienXRipley Fantasy Romance Adventure LGBTQ+
  3. The Blade’s Arpeggio by JumpingJack Fantasy LGBTQ+ Adventure Romance
  4. The Assassin’s Fake Marriage by Yortwi_NANA Action Romance
  5. But I’m A Blacksmith? by Bloomfield LGBTQ+ Fantasy Drama

Love them? Hate them? Give us your thoughts in the comments!

Posted: Just now


Forums > Readers > General

Anyone notice some overlap in the top 5 this week?

SetFireToTheTrain

While looking at the top 5 this week, I saw two stories that I’ve been following for awhile. I’m more a fan of The Blade’s Arpeggio and read every update as soon as it popped up, but occasionally I’ve also checked out Amina’s Amazing Adventure, since it’s also a gay fantasy story (which is like 90% of what I read nowadays), and they’re weirdly aligned? Like the romantic progression went at the same rate, down to both having a tall, dark-haired knight love interest, and often the same romantic actions.

They’re still pretty different stories, but when I saw them right next to each other on the top 5, I couldn’t help but wonder if there’s anyone else who’s been following both and noticed that too

Posted: 9 hours ago

FFFudge

Wtf are u tryna say? U think there’s plagiarism or something? Dont b stupid, just bc they have the same genre tags doesn’t mean they’re the same… One is way too serious and dramatic while the other is way too ridiculous and casual.

Posted: 9 hours ago

NYA-500-tart

OMG IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED!!!! OP U JUST MADE ME FEEL LIKE 20% LESS CRAZY

Like srsly, I’m more of an AAA fan, but for awhile I was following TBA too, and there was one time where AAA posted a scene involving ear nibbling and TBA almost IMMEDIATELY posted afterwards with another romantic ear nibbling scene??? Then I realized they were REALLY in sync…. Like ya I know romance is formulaic, but these chapters would be posted almost RIGHT AFTER each other and sometimes have weirdly similar details??? It’s less obvi if u binge each one individually, but for those of us who have been following each story and reading most the updates as they come out its def noticeable

Posted: 8 hours ago

SteviaM_I_N_E_C_R_A_F_T

Lol do you think the authors secretly hate and compete with each other? Enemies-to-lovers, 50k…

Posted: 5 hours ago

JumpingJack

Hey! Author of The Blade’s Arpeggio here. Just wanted to set the record straight:

Yes, our stories synced up weirdly. There are external explanations as to why this happened—we understand why some people might wonder if there was a little bit of plagiarism or something, specifically with the intimate scenes (AlienXRipley actually accused me of this at some point), but as it turns out both of us genuinely coincidentally were inspired in similar ways at the same time. There is a reason for that, but I can’t really get into it in a public forum like this.

In other words, AlienXRipley and I worked it out, and I can definitively say we are both talented, original writers who are on good terms.

Posted: 3 hours ago

AlienXRipley:

Some might even say we’re on GREAT terms now 😉

Posted: 2 hours ago


Message chat: Ochako

Today 11:24 PM

Ochako

Hey Momo, idk what kinda “studying” or “exercise” you’re doing with Kyouka and Mina, but uh could u maybe keep it down at night?”

Notes:

Thank you for reading to the end ^_^. This was p light on the plot but I had a lot of fun getting the HTML to function, and it was refreshing to do a controlled, small-scale project. Also fun to see how much I could imply without actually writing it... great exercise for an overly-wordy person like myself XD.

Also thank you to the HTML Tryhard event organizers for making the event happen! I had this concept in my head for awhile, but having an organized event helped push me to actually execute it. #ILoveDeadlines.

Find me elsewhere on tumblr or DreamWidth.

Notes:

I will be updating every day of HTML Tryhard week.