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Two Poems to Tally

Summary:

These are two poems in free verse that come from a place of enlightenment and another from inspirational envy. (There is no real enmity but I wrote one about a girl in my class who I ferried creativity off of, and showed her the poem after. It’s funny because I originally wrote a love poem to her about her smile, felt nervous about showing her, then got barely a minute of attention. I then wrote that “a cuntling has won here and acquired a trophy” yet didn’t feel at all this way about her and was shocked myself at the profanity. Something so ironic is that both me and her submitted our poems to a poetry contest and I got second place while she got third! “Announce that she’s won, yes here is her prize”. I love this girl though). Anyways, enjoy!

Notes:

Hope you enjoy! (Maybe the quatrains have meaning?)

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:

Painting Poesy 

By Violet Alonso

 

When every step alike to snow,

So gaily fought in depth to print.

Produced the poise of polished glow,

In blush his face lure cloth to lint.

 

Not so unearthed(no council made)

That heart of blame, to be revived

For love is so, a frocking doe

And white delighting duds,

beguiled. 

 

Not tenable! ‘bereaved’ to leave—

a sponsored fate, of dynasty~

In Jacob’s lair: he sought the keen! 

In title the Lord’s name. 

 

Sweet milky peace an harbinger, 

I wasn’t borne an err, to err.

But in God’s gleam, a soft careen

to appreciate the fair! 

 

Winning Smile

by Violet Alonso

 

She so elegantly perked in her cheeks 

a cluster of gathered thews and bands. 

They met to dine and welcomed me, 

sat me down in all hospitality 

and served to shame 

unscrupulous, harassing, 

begging questions about myself. 

I rasped, introspectively, 

peeled the borders and thickets of 

these waking thoughts 

like a pack rat scavenging

for reason of this unsuspecting 

grant. 

 

I must have said 

the most worthy thing 

to be looked at so

genuinely.

 

And in a second, crushed. 

 

I proposed the smiler: 

to no indent– 

or ardent–

approaching peace. 

 

Or abated away, 

that belated grief! 

Helpless. Accustomed– 

to this very scene.

 

A cuntling has won here,

and acquired a trophy. 

This apostrophe I have:

my wuthering speech to conceit.

That every exclamation 

inscribes the pillager’s coating,

posterity’s rumor–repose–

then deplete.

 

Announce that she’s won!

Yes. Here is her prize.

Notes:

Why do you like poetry? For literary edification or the feelings it insues?