16 Bookmarks by MrManWhoWrites
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A masterclass in unwanted charm. Practical tips not included. Read at your own risk. Everyone learns what "loud" truly means.
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
19 Jan 2026
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Kris tasted like cigarettes and sugar. Susie could smell the apple in their hair and the tobacco they reeked of as she impulsively kissed them. All together, it was like having a smoke while eating an apple pie. But instead, you’re watching the apple pie light up its own cig while in your lap.
Susie hated it, the first time.
kris was the cause of most of susie’s stupid choices.
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- Part 5 of lying on the floor, i've come undone
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
09 Nov 2025
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Susie don't gaf that she is dating some girl that don't care about her either, she will kiss Kris. Again.
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“S'not your fault that—”
“—I hurt you,” Susie finished. She chewed on the concept, the edges of her voice frantic, her throat thick. “Because you deserved it.”
“Yes.” Kris pressed her hands against their chest. They smiled in a way that failed to be reassuring. Each desperate breath shuddering through their lungs confirmed everything Susie didn't want to know. “S’fine. It’s okay.”
Kris burned like a charred pan straight out of the oven, or an oil fire stoked by liquor. Susie reeled away. “You—you were trying to set me up,” Susie accused, trying to edge words around the chasm opening in her gut. “You were trying to get me to hit you.”
Kris wants Susie to hurt them. They need her to hurt them. Susie isn't as on board with the idea as they are.
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Kris stared at her. They couldn’t speak for a moment, eyes poring over Susie. A part of them couldn’t believe she was actually here, sitting in front of them with a wild gaze. She was soaked, droplets falling from her hair, the jacket over her shoulders turned dark from the water. Had she really braved the rain and wind in the dark of night just because ‘it didn’t feel right leaving’? Kris was silent and unmoving before they ducked their head, running a hand over their face. They peered up at her again, palm clutched over their mouth as their cheeks threatened to tighten with a smile, but Kris took a deep breath and composed themself. They let their hand fall into their lap.
“My… sweater?” They repeated, their words coming out in a low mumble. Their head turned a sliver to the side, and Susie followed the motion and looked in the corner. Through the dark, she could just barely make out the green sweater thrown over the birdcage.i.e., Susie and a soulless Kris reflect on the events of Chapter 4 and their relationship with each other.
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
26 Oct 2025
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Very peak Krusie. Soft, much goes unspoken, but good shit
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Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
08 Oct 2025
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Short read, but every line drips with character.
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Susie is doomed. She will never be the kind of person she wants to be. She has no friends. Her father treats her like dirt. She's failing school.
She has given up on ever being better.
That is, until she awakens to a mysterious voice in her head. It claims it can help her do anything. But, can it really live up to its bold claims, especially when the new friends she makes all have their own fair share of issues?
And whats with strange happenings in Hometown? Why does it seem like the mayor knows exactly whats happening. And who is the voice in her head, really? -
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After SAO goes offline, Asuna wakes up in her hospital bed, and forces her way to Kirito’s room.
But he isn’t waking up.
Kirito Asuna role swap where Sugou captures Kirito,
Kirito finds himself tapped in a new game, and Asuna finds herself trapped outside of it.
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
21 Sep 2025
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Kirito and Asuna switch spots, waiting for more.
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After a couple months of friendship Kris wanted to confess to Susie. She just didn't believe them.
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- Part 1 of Accidental rejection
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
20 Sep 2025
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Great characterization for Susie, Kris seems quiet too. Keep an eye on this one.
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Years after the events that transpired in Hometown, Kris is living alone in another city. Stuck in a dead-end job, with nothing but their past to accompany them. They haven't spoken to their old friends in years. After everything that happened, after everything they now knew about them, they simply could not. Until one day, when they received a text from Susie. Despite themselves, they answered.
This work now has a followup: Heavy Water.
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- Part 1 of Shell of Light/Heavy Water.
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
19 Sep 2025
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Doomed krusie... But the divorce is coming. I smell it.
Post story: no divorce. :(
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Waiting for the Dark World leaves two of its heroes with the task of, perhaps awkwardly, living their usual lives again. Easier then it is for them, as they have found out, to share it. It's one month till the Sadie Hawkman's dance, and as Kris and Susie fall into friendship, they'll understand better the machinations of hearts and SOULs. A casual tale of Post-Ch. 1 Krusie. Smalltown sweetness, with a side of philosophy as expressed through dumbass teens. / Written before the release of Chapter 2
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
19 Sep 2025
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Excellent writing, extremely slow burn Krusie. Likely will never be finished, sadly.
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(Formerly known as Apples Yearn for Chalk)
Kris Dreemurr was being bullied at school. It didn't feel like bullying. Not when it wasn't the worst thing in the world. Not when they felt strangely understanding of the girl bullying them.
Susie Saurus still didn't have any friends. She doubted it would ever happen. Not that she needed a friend. Not when she was strong enough to be alone.
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Love me, Normally by Some1namedEclipse
Fandoms: Deltarune (Video Game), Undertale (Video Game)
14 Dec 2025
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During the summer, she’d taken up some gigs, and worked her ass off for some cash. Lawn work, moving stuff around, whatever she could find. Might as well put her stupid muscles to use. And somehow, she’d gotten accepted into a college on the outskirts of the Big City™ on a scholarship, along with getting a job at said college's library as an assistant (nerd job.), but whatever, cash is cash. And majoring in creative writing sure as hell was a gamble.
After exploring campus, she found herself in front of a coffee shop- Actually… It was a… Coffee / flower shop? Half of it was selling plants, the other selling drinks. ‘Butterscotch Coffee and Flowers’. Corny.
Or,
Susie got into college. She has to deal with grades, a part time job, and... Becoming a regular at a coffee/flower shop with an off-puttingly attractive human as the barista.
[On hiatus/discontinued,,,]
Bookmarked by MrManWhoWrites
16 Sep 2025
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susie made it out the hood and got to coolleg
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Kris swallowed. They cleared their throat and spoke up with a more shy and sweet voice.
"Welcome, heroes!..."
"What the?!..."
Kris continued.
"Don't be alarmed. I... Am the prince of this Kingdom... The Kingdom of darkness."
"Well,"– Susie sniffed, grumbling in a startled tone at impromptu voice acting.–"Your Kingdom sucks. Get a lamp or something."
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I saw a take saying without Dark World Krusie doesn't work. That's a lie, because we have the power of nerds. I demand a duel. This is my Krusie pistol.Or:
Kris is fantastic at voice acting and is too into improvisational roleplay. Susie becomes a big fan and then it spirals.(Now with both final Extra I and II)
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The fire inside her is burning again, and she doesn’t ever want it to stop. Brighter than a blaze or an explosion, the sort of thing she knows she can never feel again and yet so desperately wants to. Their lips taste like apples. She wants more. Their hands slide up to her neck and card through her hair. She wants more. She wants more.
The pain and the soreness and the guilt don’t register for a long, long time. It’s just her and Kris, the desk and the classroom and the world itself out of sight and out of mind.
This must be what hatred feels like.
Susie tries very, very hard to figure out how exactly she feels about Kris Dreemurr.
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"The cage with human soul and parts."
Kris is shaken up by the night's events, seeing that prophecy looming over them, hating how it implies that they are somehow less than this parasite in them. Just a cage, no different than the one they keep in their room. It's given them more perspective. They were someone before and they're someone now despite it's intrusion. Now all they want is their autonomy back, the ability to choose and the consequences that come with those choices. They hope that maybe in freeing themselves, they can change those final lines, whatever they may have been. They're willing to do whatever it takes, but how does one tell the people who have put their lives on the line for them that the idea they have of them only exists due to the actions of something that isn't really them?