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    The title says it all! I’ve decided to rewrite the entirety of Security Breach to fix up its story, and so far I’m pretty proud of the results. I’ll give you a general idea of what you should expect me to improve on, so you can judge if this is even worth your time:

    - The story is separate from the original timeline, because the original story is already wrapped up in a pretty little bow and shouldn’t be messed with anymore
    - More Sun and Moon screen time, they’re very important to the plot near the end
    - No peepaw Willie, he’s dead and buried, the villains in this book have nothing to do with him
    - Lore that actually makes sense
    - All of the animatronics have their own individual character arcs and personalities
    - Vannie has a presence as a villain
    - The plot is streamlined and has a clear direction it’s meaning to go, with actual explanations for all the character’s motives
    - And a multitude of tiny tweaks that cuts through some of the bull and gives real reasons for many things that didn’t make sense in the game

    If you’ve gotten to the end of this list and are still smiling, then you’re in the right place!

    I’ve planned 44 chapters, will finish as fast as possible

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    27 Aug 2023