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A very, very dark story about Raven Neil. How he was conditioned as a child, but part of him always rebelled against it.
A lot of things unfold differently than in canon.
In this version, Neil is THE best striker, and Riko hates him for it.
Side notes: In my story, Riko is not the main villain. He is a minor wannabe antagonist, a cheap imitation of the kind Nathaniel grew up and live with. (But still gruel)
Update: the story takes place in the Nest until chapter 26.
Also, Andrew is not medicated and the relationship with Aaron is better than in canon.
!!! Nathan & Mary are alive here !!!If you’re looking for a story that pushes Neil to his absolute physical and psychological limits, only to show him he still has the right to a life of his own, you’ve come to the right place.
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His father would have given him away for free if pride had allowed it. But the Moriyamas valued transactions, contracts. Business. Everything had a prince.
Even children.
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16 Aug 2026