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Chapter 8: Are you hungry?

Summary:

Message 08: What's your favorite color?
Message 09: Are you hungry?

Notes:

This chapter includes:
Art, Transcription, Translation Notes (Replies), Translation Results, Grace's Notes, Bonus Art/Comments

(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)

Chapter Text

Message 08: What's your favorite color?

sia-or-and-mia asked:

favorite color? or maybe fav word?

Ryland Grace from Project Hail Mary is entering through a scifi door holding a large duffle bag and looking nervous. He says "Knock knock! I'm back, and I come bearing-" A different drawing of Grace shows he now looks concerned, an orange led light reflecting in his glasses. The speech bubble continues "-Guuuuuuh Mary? Why is the dorm orange? Is something wrong? Is it a warning or-" Black boxes represent the computer speaking to Grace, saying 'Dormitory lights setting R 250 G 80 B 0 requested by auxillary crewmate "Simon". A new speech bubble has Grace saying "WHAT?" so Mary asks "Do you wish to override, Captain Doctor Grace?" Grace quickly continues "No no no, it's fine, I just- I just... didn't realize that was an option." A third image shows Simon from Iron Lung sitting on the floor against a wall with a blanket half draped over his shoulders. He has visible scars on his face. He is turning his head, alerting to Grace's presence and the conversation with Mary and watching warily. He has an open notebook on his knees and a pen in his hand as if he was writing or drawing when Grace entered.

Artist Note: Time for a flashback! This is the first time Simon was well enough for Grace to feel comfortable leaving for a couple of days. No one's sure if orange his is favorite color but it certainly is the color the dormitory has been set to for the last few weeks. Medical summaries by Mary indicate that Simon has light sensitivity in the damaged eye, so maybe the dimmer orange light is better for that?

 


 

Message 09: Are you hungry?

tinteatime asked:

Simon, have you eaten anything today?

cocco-banana asked:

Hello Simon, would you like anything to make you more comfortable? Are you maybe hungry or thirsty?

Answer:

Simon from Iron Lung is facing the viewer and appears to be bracing his hand on something and looking a bit sick. Behind him, Grace from Project Hail Mary is smiling sheepishly and is fiddling with a dry erase marker, looking a bit nervous. Next to him a dry erase board with pictures drawn explaining that the me-burgers are made from human flesh, so it can be assumed this is what Simon is uncomfortable about. There is text down the left side of the screen in a fictional pidgin language that appears to say "Otvisly, da madman vant me xiva fer som regos, so ai get obetta. Kanno pray say no~ He sersa da zapa es obvolla, near infino... (don plask me, ai versano). Ai sik to raxion erregos, but he vas alvo vhajen me... vudno ostav erdo ai etten. So ja, ai etten an allox vhenavo ai vant. Yra yu pensa det es servego ot me, veritsa." In brackets an extra note says "Yra he es vertisano an ve do dranada dis xiob, ai vil dai afor ai ett das fuken 'burgers'..." with an arrow pointed at a capri-sun style packet of nutrient shake to indicate what 'dis xiob' is referring to.

Artist Note: We need to get some really basic needs out of the way. Simon thinks he might be a vegetarian after... everything.

Transcript: Otvisly, da Madman vant me xiva fer som regos, so ai get obetta. (Kanno pray say no~) He sersa da zapa es obvolla, near infino… Don plask me, ai versano… Ai sik to raxion erregos, but he vas alvo vhajen me, vudno ostav me erdo ai etten… So ja, ai etten an allox vhenavo ai vant. Yra yu pensa es servego ot me, veritsa. (Yra he es veritsano an ve do dranada dis xiob, ai vil dai afor ai ett das fukin "burgers"...)

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Translation Notes:

kavryn | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓλ ⚯ V∀+∀λ]

("I will die before I eat those fucking burgers") fair and reasonable honestly

zer0caffeine | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓλ ⚯ λI+∀V]

I'm gonna stick to the easy guesses, I think "sik" is "stick" and "raxion" is "rations. (so "I stick to rations regardless.")"alvo vhajen" seems like "also watching" and "etten" is "eaten"

Hail Mary: [Added to database: before, eat, ration, watch, will] [Low confidence: stick] Recommend additional review.

caramiaaddio | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓλ ⚯ λVIℓI]

Ok, here’s my little attempt! “Obviously, the Madman wants me alive for some reason, so I get plenty. (Can’t really say no~) He insists the [zapa] is plentiful, near infinite… (don’t ask me, I dunno…) I tried to ration irregardless, but he was also watching me, wouldn’t leave me until I ate… So yes, I eat and drink whenever I want. [Yra] you think is [servego] of me, honestly. ([Yra] he is honest and we do drain this [xiob]… I will die before I eat those fucking "burgers".)”

I have some thoughts on the missing words too, but nothing concrete. Zapa must be some kind of food source, but clearly can’t be meat if he’s not eating meburgers. Yra feels like if/yet/but, some kind of interjection, but I don’t know what. And [xiob] probably refers to a source of food or water — maybe a place, like ship?

and servego feels like it has something to do with class? But it’s hard to say for sure without knowing what yra means

lurkinginthemuck | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ∀ ⚯ λ+λλ∀]

"xiva fer som regos" fer= for, regos=reason(?), xiva≈skin/flesh judging by the graphic on the whiteboard? Maybe something like "the madman wants my flesh for some reason so I can get better" "near infino"= nearly infinite "Don plask me, ai versano…"=Don't ask me I dunno. "Ai sik to raxion"=I stick to rations "etten"= eaten "allox vhenavo ai vant"= plenty/as much whenever I want. "Yra"=if

Hail Mary: [Added to database: alive, drain, drink, dunno?, food, honest?, infinite, insist?, leave, obvious, think, we] [Expanded definition: regos=because,reason] [Error: Meaning_conflict(veritsa=honest?, veritsano=honest?)]

[Error_override=meaning_conflict, target_word="veritsa", target_word="veritsano", reason=related_lexemes(similarity>=70%) AND negative_variant(nonshared_letters="no")]

[Updated definition: veritsano="not honest"?] Recommend additional review.

livelaughcannibalism | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ+ ⚯ VI∀Iλ]

We know 'ett' directly means eat, so the word 'obetta' could be ob- ett(-a)? ob could be a grammatical particle/prefix that means permission/opportunity/ability so: ob + etta → get to eat/allowed to eat, or 'fed'. The word feels like it's meant to be demeaning when it's put next to the phrase: "Can't really say no", he's not eating (active decision), he's getting fed (a decision forced on him). But it could just mean meals... or food...

smallkatas | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ+ ⚯ +λλ+ℓ]

I think sersa is a more intense version of ‘to say’ maybe like ‘He swears the food is plentiful, near infinite.’

Hail Mary: [Added to database: meal] [Revised definition: sersa=insist?>swear] [Contextual suppositions recorded for review: "obetta"].

livelaughcannibalism | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ+ ⚯ VVℓλ∀]

"Ai sik to raxion erregos, but he vas alvo vhajen me," We already got confirmation that the second half is "but he was always(?) watching me," and that 'raxion' is 'ration', and I'm not sure if the word exclusively means 'to ration' or 'ration' as in consumables, or if they share like the English word. I definitely think it means the former here though, since it justifies the existence of the second half: 

Simon didn't want to eat all of the food he's given to stretch it out further even if the food supply/quantity(zapa(?)) is supposedly near infinite(infino) (skeptical Simon noises), but he can't hide the food away if Grace is always watching or hovering. Which means that 'sik' (a word that could be based off English: seek, eh???) likely means something along the lines of 'try' or 'attempt'? 

"I try to ration regardless, but he was always watching me,"

renofrats | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ+ ⚯ V∀∀∀V]

If “sik” is seek, it feels more fitting to his attitude towards the food. “I seek to ration regardless” aka he’s trying to ration but it’s hard when grace is always watching him

Hail Mary: [Added to database: seek, supply] [Expanded definition: sik=seek,try]

smallkatas | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ+ ⚯ λV+ℓ+]

Veritsa is truthful/honest and Veritsano is lying/dishonest!! “If you think that is [servego] of me, honestly” and “If he is lying and we do drain this ship…” Also xiob sounds like xit so I think it’s a more explicit way to say ship. Dranada could also mean deplete.

livelaughcannibalism | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓ∀ ⚯ Iℓ∀∀+]

I know what the finally missing sentence is trying to convey... Yra is definitely if, Like: "If you think [this] is selfish of me, {then you'd be correct.}" But I can't find a good word for it and it's killing me... WAIT WAIT, CAN IT BE LIKE AN IDIOM THAT MEANS OR IS JUST STRAIGHT UP 'RIGHTFULLY SO'?? "If you think [this] is selfish of me, [then] rightfully so." ?????

Hail Mary: [Added to database: deplete, if] [Revised definition: veritsano="not honest"?>dishonest] [Expanded definition: veritsa = dishonest/lie] [Expanded definition: veritsa = honest?/true?] [Contextual suppositions recorded for review: "veritsa"]

smallkatas | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀Iℓ ⚯ ∀IVℓI]

Okay I understand now. The ‘Veritsa’ is actually an imperative mood, not an adverb. ie ‘be honest’ instead of ‘honestly’

Hail Mary: [Definition updated: honest?>"be honest"] [Contextual suppositions recorded for review: "veritsa"]

[Process triggered: target_word="veritsa", flag=context_review_ADMIN, reason=veritsa(contextual_suppositions>=3)]

Processing... database updated with analogous synonyms...

Translation complete. 

Translation: "Obviously, the Madman wants me alive for some reason, so I get meals. (Can't really say no~) He swears the supply is plentiful, near infinite... (Don't ask me, I don't understand...) I tried to ration regardless, but he was always watching me, wouldn't leave me until I'd eaten... So yeah, I eat and drink whenever I want. If you think that's selfish of me, {be honest}. (If he is lying an we do deplete this food... I will die before I eat those fucking "burgers".)"

[Error: flag(context_review,"veritsa")] Compiling contextual suppositions... Admin review requested...

 

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Grace's Notes: "Simon doesn't seem that bothered about only eating nutrient shake all the time, but food variety is important and I wanted to make sure he had every option available to him. I brought a me-burger with me on this visit as an example.

He generally ignores me unless I ask a direct question, but it definitely got his attention when I unwrapped the raw patty. He kept staring at it like it was going to disappear if he wasn't watching it. Or maybe he thought it would jump up and bite him. He can be hard to read sometimes.

Then I had to actually explain how the Eridians make the me-burgers.

It was oddly embarrassing. I had to draw a lot of pictures on the whiteboard. I'm still not sure exactly how much English he understands, but science terminology especially seems to make his eyes glaze over.

When he finally understood, he went pale, muttered a few curse words, and then refused to talk to me for the rest of my visit. He just pretended I didn't exist until I left. That is a pretty unequivocal result. No me-burgers for Simon.

...It's weird to be disappointed by that, right?"

 


Ryland Grace from Project Hail Mary looks irritated with his mouth open, as he grasps Rocky the Eridian's xenonite suit and speaks to him. "Rocky. How did we live on that ship for IVVℓℓ (1800) days without figuring out the lights could be any color I wanted?" Rocky replies, "That's on Grace 100% how the fuck would I have known lmao." Grace is wearing his fox sweater and is decorated with Eridian jewelry.

kavryn | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓλ ⚯ V∀+∀λ]

yeah no wonder he calls Grace a madman. Sorry I sedated and imprisoned you, anyway, wanna eat a burger made from my own flesh? 8D ("I will die before I eat those fucking burgers") fair and reasonable honestly

clottedscream | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀ℓλ ⚯ ∀∀+ℓℓ]

looks like he understands just enough english to know what cloning flesh means

nibblesflesh-blog | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀Iℓ ⚯ λ∀II]

Unrelated to guessing -- Your doodleboys bring me so much joy. I would die for Doodle!Simon's grossed-out little squiggle mouth

feyqueen91 | [Aug 14][⧂ ∀Iℓ ⚯ I+++λ]

Well at least Grace had the courtesy of telling Simon what the “burgers” were made of before Simon ate one. At least I would think Ryland would have told him beforehand.😅

smallkatas | [Aug 15][⧂ ∀I+ ⚯ +V+∀λ]

Grace wants Simon to eat him so bad it makes him look stupid.

12opossumsinarobe | [Aug 15][⧂ ∀I∀ ⚯ +ℓλℓ]

But how would Simon feel about you-burgers? A scientist leaves no stone unturned!

Notes:

Edited some of Hail Mary's stuff to better match the next chapter and discovered I am so so so good at misspelling my own made-up language. Vertisa =/= Veritsa.

The admin will review all these contextual suppositions eventually...

Notes:

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