gf rewrite au
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“Oh, I’m sorry!” she apologized. “It’s just---Dude, that's awesome that you're a grown man riding a little train like that. You're totally, like, owning it.”
“Huh?” Soos said intelligently. “Oh, yeah, I'm like, if it's fun, do it, you know?”
The woman’s eyes lit up. “Exactly!” she cried. “Being an adult is the worst! Dealing with difficult patients, remembering to pay bills---I just want to ride tiny trains all day.”
“Do you work with animals?” Soos asked, pointing to the paw print on her lab coat. “Animals will one day replace us when we’ve messed up the world beyond repair, so why not give them a head start so they won’t teach their kids to hate our memory? At least, that’s what I think.”
“I feel the same way,” the woman smiled. She held out her hand for Soos to shake. “I’m Melody, by the way.”
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A rewrite of 'Soos and the Real Girl' so that Melody is not just Soos’s love interest whom he saves to further his character development.
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- Part 1 of gf rewrite au
- Part 8 of lead me through the shadows
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“Yeah,” Dipper said. “Yeah, maybe you’re right. Hey, guys, wait for me!” He ran over to hang out with them. Mabel watched them, then turned her attention back to the anti-love potion. Then back to Robbie and Tambry.
“...They’ll be fine,” she decided, and was just about to leave before Robbie noticed her.
“Hey!” he snapped, and Mabel winced. “What are you doing here, brat! We’re on a date!”
“AAAHHH, I’m sorry!” Mabel screamed as the two teens advanced towards her. “I put love potion in your food this morning because I wanted to fix the rift between your friends but I was having regrets and now you know!!”
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Rewrite of The Love God, in which Mabel tells Tambry and Robbie that she used love potion to get them to start dating.
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- Part 9 of lead me through the shadows
- Part 2 of gf rewrite au
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“Let’s swear a sister’s truce to not waste time on Marius,” Mabel said, holding her hand out.
“Deal,” Grenda agreed, putting her hand on top of Mabel’s.
“Deal,” Candy agreed, following Grenda’s lead.
“Deal,” all three said.
They stood there for a moment, hands all on top of each other.
“So…” Candy began, “what now?”
Grenda looked around the ballroom, her eyes landing on a door in the back that led to the rest of the mansion. She turned to the other girls, a wide grin spreading across her face. “Trespassing?”
Candy and Mabel looked at each other. Then, in harmony, “Trespassing!”
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A rewrite of Norhtwest Mansion Mystery so Mabel ends up helping Pacifica instead of Dipper. A more satisfying continuation of Mabel and Pacifica’s arc than where The Golf War left it hanging awkwardly, plus it’s more in character for Mabel to give Dipper’s “you’re not a bad person” speech. That boy is not that emotionally intelligent to do that.
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- Part 3 of gf rewrite au
- Part 10 of lead me through the shadows
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“I’ll pay in cash,” Pacifica was saying. “Can you break a thousand-dollar bill?”
“Pacifica, NO!” Mabel screamed, rushing forward.
Mr. What’s-His-Face whirled around with a “Wha---?!” His hand was away from Pacifica’s face now, and the red flame shot out with a ZAP! that was closer to lightning.
It hit square in the middle of Dipper’s face.
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Rewrite of the Lost Legends comic 'Face It!' so that Dipper’s face is stolen instead of Mabel’s---yup, you guessed it, more Mabel and Pacifica arc development and closure. Again, Dipper is not that emotionally intelligent.
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- Part 4 of gf rewrite au
- Part 11 of lead me through the shadows
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In which I rewrote Dipper’s ending monologue at the end of the finale so it’s Mabel saying it instead, plus a rewrite of the ending bus scene so the goodbye note is to both twins.
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- Part 5 of gf rewrite au
- Part 12 of lead me through the shadows