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At the End of the Line by AishaTheLioness
Fandoms: Super Mario & Related Fandoms, Super Mario Bros. (Video Games), The Super Mario Bros. Movie (2023)
20 Nov 2025
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Bowser’s quest for power and a princess-to-be-his-queen has led him to hatch countless schemes, launch countless invasions, and fight countless battles.
And all he’s had to show for it is countless failures.
But losing was NOT an option, and neither was giving up! So, perhaps it was time for a new strategy…
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After years of being sworn enemies, it appears neither Bowser nor Mario have any intention of surrendering. They seem destined to be locked in this cycle of struggle forever, with Princess Peach stuck in the middle. But what happens when the cycle is shattered, and Bowser wins?
This is the story of how the Koopa King secured the Mushroom Kingdom, a reluctant bride, and a surprising side dish of remorse all in one fell swoop.
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- Part 2 of ⁺˚⋆｡°✩ ~The Star Cycle Saga~ ✩°｡⋆˚⁺
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The Hero I Always Wanted to Be. by Hitfran
Fandoms: 魔法少女にあこがれて | Mahou Shoujo ni Akogarete | I admire magical girls and... (Manga), 魔法少女にあこがれて | Mahou Shoujo ni Akogarete | I admire magical girls and... (Anime), 僕のヒーローアカデミア | Boku no Hero Academia | My Hero Academia (Anime & Manga)
20 Nov 2025
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I'm bad at summaries so basically:
Utena gets sealed away by Venalita for more than a century and wakes up in the world of MHA where she must face the fact that everyone she knows might be dead and there are no Magical Girls for her to play with. But maybe, now she can become the Magical Girl she always wanted to be instead of the villain.
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Paradise Found by Jack_White
Fandoms: Forgotten Realms (Roleplaying Game), Christian Bible, Dungeons & Dragons (Roleplaying Game)
20 Nov 2025
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The world of Earth ebbs against another, a greater universe of magic, Gods, adventure, and heroes. Within these cracks in space and time, the enemy of Yahweh slips through and finds himself in a new world, one where he can find victory and a new love.
Biblical reinterpretation meets the cosmic beginnings of D&D’s Forgotten Realms with demonic romance to top it all off. Given the loose nature of Forgotten Realms lore, especially about ancient times, liberties will be taken.
Forgotten Realms devils take a lot of names from Christian myth, but there will be no characters with the same name.
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A Helluva Bad Deal by Serious6665
Fandoms: Helluva Boss (Web Series), Hazbin Hotel (Cartoon)
20 Nov 2025
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Note: I cleaned up the tags and made them a lot better
After the events of Sinsmas, Stolas has been adjusting to the life Blitzø's always lived. He's figured he might as well adjust to it, as he'll be stuck like that for the next hundred years.
During one of Stolas' first missions out, things go wrong. Stolas blacks out, and meets a figure from Hell's past. He makes a deal for his power back, at the consequence of needing to help free a long gone, ancient evil.
He awakens in Beelzebub's home in the wrath ring, discovering he had been out for 6 days. Beelzebub comforts him, while Lucifer tells him exactly who the figure was.
As he grapples with the consequences of the deal, he slowly learns that maybe he shouldn't be so trusting with demons offering power in exchange for his soul.
TLDR: Stolas makes a big mistake.
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I just added some OC's to the Naruto world, so whatever happens will happen...
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Progeny of the Alien Gods by AncestralIcy
Fandoms: Fate/Grand Order, InuYasha - A Feudal Fairy Tale
20 Nov 2025
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What happens when opposites attract? An adorable curious marshmallow of a boy who earnestly wants to make others happy. And the other a merciless sociopath only now just starting to feel emotions. A meeting that will speed the latter's life toward his destiny, while the other tries sincerely to make him happy.
Lotus, together with Voyager will find out what he truly desires.
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- Part 1 of Progeny
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It wasn’t until the summer of 1871. Baptist and his father Cecil are bound together on a journey west from their Iowa farm, leaving the life Cecil built and Baptist only knew behind.
When bandits came to pillage their rotting farmhouse, they fled. Baptist, a young boy, only knowing the control of his father and the landscapes of corn fields, is tossed into cruel worlds. Cecil, a man ruled by his own pursuits of freedom and pride, has to carve a way of life for himself and his son, often leaving morality behind.
This description isn’t the best, but I’ve never posted anything before. Criticism is welcomed and appreciated to the pacific and back.
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Echoes to Eternity : Percy's Second Chance by Kassie Dire (MsChaoticQueen)
Fandoms: Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rick Riordan, Percy Jackson and the Olympians & Related Fandoms - All Media Types
19 Nov 2025
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In which, Percy gets another chance, but with a bigger family and a twin sister.
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In which, Percy dies and still decides to cause chaos...
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Ringmaster always was obsessed with keeping his image pristine to the other survivors. But how far could he run from his past, and keep spewing his lies? A lie so big, it could honestly be seen as the greatest one ever told…
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Crystal Phantom by SinfulRose
Fandoms: Baldur's Gate (Video Games), baldur's gate 3 - Fandom, Dungeons & Dragons (Roleplaying Game)
19 Nov 2025
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An adventurer named Lyra wakes up from unconsciousness on a mind flayer dimension-crossing ship infected with a parasitic tadpole that threatens to transform her into a mind flayer. Alongside several others who have met the same fate, they are forced to go on a quest to find a remedy to prevent ceremorphosis. However, Lyra found herself without her memories and resisting unwanted urges/thoughts, unlike her traveling companions.
(The very rough draft is posted too)
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Several years of living on U.S. Outpost 31 and Peridot hasn’t much gotten used to the cold. Her girlfriend is a few miles off base helping the Norwegians, so she’s stuck here, dealing with coworkers she can barely tolerate on a day-to-day basis. It’s manageable, if a bit dull.
Until communications are cut and they’re attacked by the Norwegians they thought were allies, chasing some… dog.
Everything changes after that. She doesn’t know who to trust. No one is who they say they say they are. It’s so cold — colder than it’s ever been and will be.
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After Niffty showed Angel Dust Who Framed Rodger Rabbit, the resident hotel spider couldn't help but feel jealousy towards one particular cartoon character. She simply has the skillset that Angel Dust simply doesn't have. So, after a good few drinks, Husk decides to give Angel his own take, and endure a lot of Angel's flirting along the way.
Husk loves Angel, but man, he finds pep talks so difficult when he's...distracted.
(Set in Season 2, before Scream Rain.)
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Sam is just a normal guy. But after an unfortunate accident, he get reborn into a unknown other world.
He has a completely different body and there's three Moons!
Unfortunatly he's reborn as hybrid at a particularly dangerous time. A NightRain hybrid.
Though he will soon find that his presence in this world will have consequences that affect the events of Pyrrhia.
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Once More by PhantomSith
Fandoms: Le Fantôme de l'Opéra | Phantom of the Opera & Related Fandoms, Phantom of the Opera - Lloyd Webber, Love Never Dies - Lloyd Webber, Love Never Dies - Fandom, Le Fantôme de l'Opéra | Phantom of the Opera - Gaston Leroux
19 Nov 2025
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After the events of Love Never Dies, Erik is given the incredible chance to go eleven years into the past to try and win Christine's love all over again.
With age, maturity, and over a decade of regret acting as his guide; Erik wipes the slate clean and changes everything in an effort to right his past wrongs. Entrapped by the Moral Code and Expectations of her time, Christine struggles to discover what she wants with the support of her Strange Teacher.
Beta Read by PhantomoftheBroadgrass
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- Part 2 of Bended Time
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You're the one, You're all I ever wanted (I think I'll regret this) by rrainedrops
Fandoms: Inanimate Insanity (Web Series)
18 Nov 2025
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It had been a few weeks since Nickel got eliminated from Season 2, and he was slowly getting used to his new life in the hotel. The last thing he expected, though, was to receive a love confession from none other than his best friend, Baseball.
And to make matters worse, he'd been forced to share a room with his sworn enemy, Balloon; and as much as Nickel would like to deny it... Maybe he wasn't that bad.
Nickel still hated him though, of course. That wasn't going to change anytime soon. Or at least, that's what he thought.
Aka... Nickel is gay for balloon and wont admit it
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(This is a RE-UPLOAD of the original Potentialism that I wrote, me myself, I am just reposting it because the original fic got orphaned.)
Writing quality tends to fluctuate between "No sleep crud tired school day", "What were you on when you wrote this", and maybe peak.
Work in progress!
SPOILER WARNING
Do not read if you don't want spoilers for the main book series. This fic is set in an alternate universe, but it will still include a lot of the canon content.Tui, please let my family go.
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Sonic Severance by TheGreatBlur
Fandoms: Sonic the Hedgehog - All Media Types, Sonic the Hedgehog (Video Games)
19 Nov 2025
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In a miracle-calling clash, the unprecedented threat of "ATS" was vanquished...at the cost of Sonic the Hedgehog's life.
Now, decades later, when new threats endanger the hard-earned peace, the next generation of heroes must step up to the plate and severe themselves from all the rest. -
The Big Shell Run by MossyMossbird for NimbRose
Fandoms: Invisible Inc. (Video Game), Metal Gear (Video Games)
18 Nov 2025
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The year is 2057. A marine decontamination facility has been captured by heavily armed and augmented econ-terrorists.
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“Pick a number between one and one million!”
“You're looping again,” Odile says flatly.
“Is your number…” and you pause for dramatic effect. “four thousand and seventeen??”
“How many times?”
“We've talked twice now,” you chirp. “and it took me around four hours to convince you to tell me a number, which was lame of you.”aka, Loop is a mess but through the power of talking to anyone ever, they figure things out
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Heart of a Warrior by SleeplessArcher
Fandoms: Warriors - Erin Hunter, Persona Series, Persona | Revelations Persona, Persona 2, Persona 3, Persona 4, Persona 5
18 Nov 2025
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Rusty thought that joining Thunderclan would be relatively straightforward. He was prepared to work hard and do what he could to become a strong, dependable warrior.
But then he awakened a Persona, gained access to a realm overrun with shadowy monsters, and had to fight said shadowy monsters alongside a cat who hated him and another cat who never seemed to have a straight answer. He also had to (somehow) balance that with a normal social life.
He really had no idea what he was in for.
(Reposted - rewritten for clarity and to correct multiple errors)
Cut-In art was commissioned by me and made by Pixelroses_ct. They can be found here:
https://www.instagram.com/pixelroses_ct/All-Out Attack art was commissioned by me and made by IsaaCOWj. They can be found here:
https://x.com/isaacowj